Anemones and Shells My Childhood

As I recall my past, it was a sea kissed life
summers spent roaming the Rabbit Burrows
cradled by dunes, beyond Tramore strand
towels stretched out on Woodstown beach
soft powdered sand, surrounded by forest
adventures in the Saleens, daring quicksand
of swimming with dad, high jumping waves
falling, laughing in great gulps of salt water
free and fearless, in our bare bronzed years


It was a sea salted life of wave-washed castles
of tide pools, alive with translucent shrimps
carmine anemones sucked tight to the rocks
periwinkles, hermit crabs, a world of shells
baby pink crabs moving sideways over stone
textured algae, salted, crisping in the heat
our faces stinging with sand and hot sunshine
we spent hours with nets, exploring the pools


After months and years of living near the sea
the landscape became an essential part of me.
I saw fuchsia ballerinas pirouette the breeze
sea pinks, grassy rosettes swaying on cliff tops
rocket, tiny lilac petals with succulent leaves
valerian, a candy floss pink, sweetly scented
We picked them and pressed them into books


I recall my child’s life with a skipping heart
when summers seemed to shine eternal
The rock pools taught us to treasure nature
togetherness bred a strong sense of self
a respect for the sea, the taste of freedom
when I open a book, I often find a flower
and shells -  this child is forever combing

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 1/1/2011 11:55:00 PM
Eiken, I think your true eloquence is best displayed in this type of writing. You are one awesome prose poetry person! Luv, andrea
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Date: 12/31/2010 7:08:00 AM
Hi Eiken. How strange that you write of Woodstown and Tramore. Used to live in the first and now live in the latter. There is fantastic imagery painted with words in this. There is a great poet in Wicklow that remind me of your work . Check it out below and let me know your thoughts. A peaceful and joy filled New Year to you and yours. Eamon http://writing4all.ie/writings/poetry/shadows-candlelight-0#comment-75890
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Date: 12/30/2010 7:14:00 AM
Hi Eiken. congratulations on your deserved success in the contest with this fine piece. Eamon
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Date: 12/30/2010 5:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Eiken in Crystal Wilkin's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/29/2010 8:51:00 PM
that was an exquisite piece, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 12/29/2010 1:48:00 PM
This is truly deserving of the great win in Crystal's "Childhood Memories, Contest, Eiken! Congratulations are in order! Blessings, peace, joy and happiness for the coming New Year and always! Love, Audrey
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Date: 12/29/2010 12:35:00 PM
Congrats Eiken on your super win in the Childhood Memories contest... with this exceptional entry and write ... enjoy with luv and a Happy New Year too...
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