Andromeda

'Neath the moonlight,
Standing still,
Chained to rock,
Against my will,
Staring at the ocean deep,
That seems to me like eternity,
I strive so hard to free my chains,
But even as the moon doth wane,
I still stand,
Chained to that rock,
And my strength begins to fade,
Every crashing wave I hear,
Brings on bitter,lonely tears,
I try to tell myself that
Someone will take me away,
Away to a better place,
But as my consciousness falls astray,
I start to despair,
That someone else, 
Will never come to save me from my lair,
But then I hear a voice,
That tells me to hold on,
Just a little longer,
She said she won't be long,
Then I feel my chains are gone,
I'm wrapped in loving arms.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Taylor Avatar
April 16, 2015 at 6:28 PM
ANOTHER nice write! You got way to much talent! BTW, this is one of my favorite stories from greek mythology and you did Andromeda justice with this! Brava! <3 Tash
Templin Avatar
April 18, 2015 at 8:14 AM
I'm so happy to hear that! It's one of my favorite from Greek Mythology as well ^_^
Lovechild Avatar
April 13, 2015 at 9:50 PM
Nice write...all's well that ends well, right? Welcome to the Soup.
Templin Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 2:42 PM
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it :)
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