Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Verse

Andromeda

I wanted to buy the star                                         
Andromeda from cosmologist
Fred Hoyle for my 
dead sweetie Iris.

To build her in lab for                                              
short childhood, lasting youth
To teach her love will touch softly
for pain will pinch her.

I invoke you to rise 
delay your departure                                        
to shine on her as you find 
guide this pilgrim to her.

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June 24, 2014
Form: Naani (Syllables 25 per stanza on www.howmanysyllables.com  
Dr. Ram Mehta
Thgird Place win
Contest: Shine with yiour Naani by nette onclaud

**I taught A for Andromeda, a one-act play in late sixties. The Milky Way's nearest neighbor in space is the spiral galaxy, Andromeda. It was first seen by a telescope in 1612 by Simon Marius. It was first seen by the naked eye in 1964 by a Persian astronomer, Abd Al-Rahman Al Sufi. Andromeda. She is biologically built in a lab with very short childhood
within few months she is in her youth. She lacked one thing. She had not feelings. One has got teach her what is pain pleasure, hate etc. etc.

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Poet Destroyer A July 4, 2014 at 10:08 AM Dr Ram, Congratulations, in Nette's " SHINE WITH YOUR NAANI!!" Contest :) LINDA

Greg Hoffman July 2, 2014 at 8:21 AM Congrats on your win with this poem,well done Dr. Ram

Joseph May July 1, 2014 at 6:32 PM Congrats on your win Dr Ram

Frederic Parker July 1, 2014 at 5:35 PM congratulation Dr Ram for this well deserved win

Arlene Smith July 1, 2014 at 4:24 PM Thank you for sharing this encredible write, my friend and congrats on a great win!.. Hugs.. Arlene

Nette Onclaud July 1, 2014 at 3:42 PM an impressive longing that appeals to my senses, dr.ram... thanks for gracing my contest and sweet congrats on your high win.. huggs

Pandita Sietesantos July 1, 2014 at 1:19 PM Hi Dr. Ram - Bravo on your great win - well deserved! Have a wonderful day!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 1, 2014 at 1:02 PM Great take Dr Ram as always ! Loved this read ,, all the more tough footnote,, thnx ,, congrats on huge win !

Mohan Chutani July 1, 2014 at 12:37 PM Lovely Naanis on Andromeda from past experience. Congrats again, Dr. Ram. Mohan

Paul Callus July 1, 2014 at 11:36 AM Informative and well thought out poem. Congrats on your high placing. // paul

Eileen Manassian July 1, 2014 at 10:34 AM Congrats on your win with this interesting piece on Andromeda, Dr Ram.

M. L. Kiser June 30, 2014 at 2:16 PM That was truly, a beautiful poem.

Casarah Nance June 24, 2014 at 8:08 AM That is awesome, I love your following story too, you have great experiences and different ways for writing that is unique and enjoyable! Best of luck in the contest :)