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I wanted to buy the star Andromeda from cosmologist Fred Hoyle for my dead sweetie Iris. To build her in lab for short childhood, lasting youth To teach her love will touch softly for pain will pinch her. I invoke you to rise delay your departure to shine on her as you find guide this pilgrim to her. ====================== June 24, 2014 Form: Naani (Syllables 25 per stanza on Dr. Ram Mehta Thgird Place win Contest: Shine with yiour Naani by nette onclaud **I taught A for Andromeda, a one-act play in late sixties. The Milky Way's nearest neighbor in space is the spiral galaxy, Andromeda. It was first seen by a telescope in 1612 by Simon Marius. It was first seen by the naked eye in 1964 by a Persian astronomer, Abd Al-Rahman Al Sufi. Andromeda. She is biologically built in a lab with very short childhood within few months she is in her youth. She lacked one thing. She had not feelings. One has got teach her what is pain pleasure, hate etc. etc.

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Date: 7/4/2014 10:08:00 AM
Dr Ram, Congratulations, in Nette's " SHINE WITH YOUR NAANI!!" Contest :) LINDA
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Date: 7/2/2014 8:21:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this poem,well done Dr. Ram
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Date: 7/1/2014 6:32:00 PM
Congrats on your win Dr Ram
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Date: 7/1/2014 5:35:00 PM
congratulation Dr Ram for this well deserved win
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Date: 7/1/2014 4:24:00 PM
Thank you for sharing this encredible write, my friend and congrats on a great win!.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/1/2014 3:42:00 PM
an impressive longing that appeals to my senses, dr.ram... thanks for gracing my contest and sweet congrats on your high win.. huggs
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Date: 7/1/2014 1:19:00 PM
Hi Dr. Ram - Bravo on your great win - well deserved! Have a wonderful day!
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Date: 7/1/2014 1:02:00 PM
Great take Dr Ram as always ! Loved this read ,, all the more tough footnote,, thnx ,, congrats on huge win !
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Date: 7/1/2014 12:37:00 PM
Lovely Naanis on Andromeda from past experience. Congrats again, Dr. Ram. Mohan
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Date: 7/1/2014 11:36:00 AM
Informative and well thought out poem. Congrats on your high placing. // paul
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Date: 7/1/2014 10:34:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this interesting piece on Andromeda, Dr Ram.
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Date: 6/30/2014 2:16:00 PM
That was truly, a beautiful poem.
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Date: 6/24/2014 8:08:00 AM
That is awesome, I love your following story too, you have great experiences and different ways for writing that is unique and enjoyable! Best of luck in the contest :)
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