Get Your Premium Membership

Andromeda

I wanted to buy the star                                         
Andromeda from cosmologist
Fred Hoyle for my 
dead sweetie Iris.

To build her in lab for                                              
short childhood, lasting youth
To teach her love will touch softly
for pain will pinch her.

I invoke you to rise 
delay your departure                                        
to shine on her as you find 
guide this pilgrim to her.

======================

June 24, 2014
Form: Naani (Syllables 25 per stanza on www.howmanysyllables.com  
Dr. Ram Mehta
Thgird Place win
Contest: Shine with yiour Naani by nette onclaud

**I taught A for Andromeda, a one-act play in late sixties. The Milky Way's nearest neighbor in space is the spiral galaxy, Andromeda. It was first seen by a telescope in 1612 by Simon Marius. It was first seen by the naked eye in 1964 by a Persian astronomer, Abd Al-Rahman Al Sufi. Andromeda. She is biologically built in a lab with very short childhood
within few months she is in her youth. She lacked one thing. She had not feelings. One has got teach her what is pain pleasure, hate etc. etc.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/4/2014 10:08:00 AM
Dr Ram, Congratulations, in Nette's " SHINE WITH YOUR NAANI!!" Contest :) LINDA
Login to Reply
Date: 7/2/2014 8:21:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this poem,well done Dr. Ram
Login to Reply
Date: 7/1/2014 6:32:00 PM
Congrats on your win Dr Ram
Login to Reply
Date: 7/1/2014 5:35:00 PM
congratulation Dr Ram for this well deserved win
Login to Reply
Date: 7/1/2014 4:24:00 PM
Thank you for sharing this encredible write, my friend and congrats on a great win!.. Hugs.. Arlene
Login to Reply
Date: 7/1/2014 3:42:00 PM
an impressive longing that appeals to my senses, dr.ram... thanks for gracing my contest and sweet congrats on your high win.. huggs
Login to Reply
Date: 7/1/2014 1:19:00 PM
Hi Dr. Ram - Bravo on your great win - well deserved! Have a wonderful day!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/1/2014 1:02:00 PM
Great take Dr Ram as always ! Loved this read ,, all the more tough footnote,, thnx ,, congrats on huge win !
Login to Reply
Date: 7/1/2014 12:37:00 PM
Lovely Naanis on Andromeda from past experience. Congrats again, Dr. Ram. Mohan
Login to Reply
Date: 7/1/2014 11:36:00 AM
Informative and well thought out poem. Congrats on your high placing. // paul
Login to Reply
Date: 7/1/2014 10:34:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this interesting piece on Andromeda, Dr Ram.
Login to Reply
Date: 6/30/2014 2:16:00 PM
That was truly, a beautiful poem.
Login to Reply
Date: 6/24/2014 8:08:00 AM
That is awesome, I love your following story too, you have great experiences and different ways for writing that is unique and enjoyable! Best of luck in the contest :)
Login to Reply

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry