Andromeda

star site unchained spiral light spinner showering falls fill the eye of wakening man form sentient tomorrows dream dance made fair opal tears of joy enliven we sleep being not a choice writhe on eternity waits not Poet:Debbie Guzzi Contest:Pen a Pensee Date: July 1, 2012

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 7/21/2012 9:27:00 AM

Congrats on your wonderful win, Debbie! A beautiful read this morning that I would have placed higher. :)) Have a wonderful weekend. Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Kash Poet

Date: 7/20/2012 8:27:00 AM

Congratulations Debi!Beautiful!!

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 7/18/2012 4:46:00 PM

Beautiful piece,Debbie...Congratulations on your well deserved win..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/18/2012 4:24:00 PM

((()))Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/18/2012 9:02:00 AM

This makes all dreams dance with wonder and delight! Congrats to one who does not wait an eternity!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/18/2012 8:50:00 AM

cryptic as it can get and still flowing on beautifully, debbie.. congrats on your win in my contest!..:) huggs!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 7/18/2012 6:05:00 AM

Smashing write Debbie, Congratulations xx

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/18/2012 5:34:00 AM

Congratulations on you win in Nette's "Pen A Pensee" contest Debbie. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/18/2012 5:09:00 AM

congrats Debbie on a great win for this fine entry luv extolling the Pensee and the subject so informative r your words.. always a treat to read u luv..

Deborah Burch

Date: 7/10/2012 8:11:00 PM

AWSOME!!! well done , Deb!!! i like this a lot!!! bighugssss,love you, deb (sm)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/8/2012 11:41:00 AM

trying to catch up on reading but so far behind. A awesome write on this verse Deb. love phyl

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/3/2012 6:43:00 AM

Elegantly crafted, cher. Got to attempt this form though I will surly fall flat on my face (ouch) Saw a piece on the internet about scientist's discovering the so called "God particle?" Apparantly the missing link to the big bang? Way over MY head but perhaps you would grasp it better - Tim

Robert Pettit

Date: 7/2/2012 1:56:00 PM

I thought I'd check this one out because I submitted a work with the same title a little while back. If I ever want to see a writing of great quality, all I have to do is see something of yours.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/1/2012 5:16:00 PM

I like this a lot....nuthin' against gary....'jus never liked him....but i did love yer instant limerick...you got american talent!

David Williams

Date: 7/1/2012 3:21:00 PM

Debbie, I like this, she was the daughter of Cassiopia, good luck..David