Debbie Guzzi Poet Verse

Andromeda

star site
unchained spiral
light spinner showering falls
fill the eye of wakening man
form sentient tomorrows

dream dance
made fair opal
tears of joy enliven we
sleep being not a choice writhe on
eternity waits not


Poet:Debbie Guzzi
Contest:Pen a Pensee
Date: July 1, 2012

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders July 21, 2012 at 9:27 AM Congrats on your wonderful win, Debbie! A beautiful read this morning that I would have placed higher. :)) Have a wonderful weekend. Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Kash Poet July 20, 2012 at 8:27 AM Congratulations Debi!Beautiful!!

Olusegun Arowolo July 18, 2012 at 4:46 PM Beautiful piece,Debbie...Congratulations on your well deserved win..

Sara Kendrick July 18, 2012 at 4:24 PM ((()))Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Carrie Richards July 18, 2012 at 9:02 AM This makes all dreams dance with wonder and delight! Congrats to one who does not wait an eternity!!

Nette Onclaud July 18, 2012 at 8:50 AM cryptic as it can get and still flowing on beautifully, debbie.. congrats on your win in my contest!..:) huggs!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl July 18, 2012 at 6:05 AM Smashing write Debbie, Congratulations xx

Carol Sunshine Brown July 18, 2012 at 5:34 AM Congratulations on you win in Nette's "Pen A Pensee" contest Debbie. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 18, 2012 at 5:09 AM congrats Debbie on a great win for this fine entry luv extolling the Pensee and the subject so informative r your words.. always a treat to read u luv..

Deborah Burch July 10, 2012 at 8:11 PM AWSOME!!! well done , Deb!!! i like this a lot!!! bighugssss,love you, deb (sm)

Phyllis Babcock July 8, 2012 at 11:41 AM trying to catch up on reading but so far behind. A awesome write on this verse Deb. love phyl

Tim Ryerson July 3, 2012 at 6:43 AM Elegantly crafted, cher. Got to attempt this form though I will surly fall flat on my face (ouch) Saw a piece on the internet about scientist's discovering the so called "God particle?" Apparantly the missing link to the big bang? Way over MY head but perhaps you would grasp it better - Tim

Robert Pettit July 2, 2012 at 1:56 PM I thought I'd check this one out because I submitted a work with the same title a little while back. If I ever want to see a writing of great quality, all I have to do is see something of yours.

James Marshall Goff July 1, 2012 at 5:16 PM I like this a lot....nuthin' against gary....'jus never liked him....but i did love yer instant limerick...you got american talent!

David Williams July 1, 2012 at 3:21 PM Debbie, I like this, she was the daughter of Cassiopia, good luck..David