Andromeda

bright star
intense night glow
captures black celestial realm
overpowering nearby planets
His eye is upon us

Copyright © 2012 By Caryl S. Muzzey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Horne Avatar
July 21, 2012 at 10:51 AM
truly beautiful piece, Caryl. Congrats on all your wins : )
Dietrich Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 9:39 PM
wow, I sure like how you did that last line tying it all together, Caryl. Very nice.
Pettit Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 1:25 PM
Looks like a good example for a pensee.
Duncan Avatar
July 15, 2012 at 2:31 AM
nice,,,,, very nice ,,,, wishing you luck in winning,,,, blessings of the day !
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