Andrea Correct Me If Im Wrong

Tantamount Andrea,
Your beauty crumbles my veins and compels me to whisper to desire.
My heart blossoms as the fantasizes stir to my brains,
Call it desire, bonny or may be, mirage.
You’re a princess I think of during the sunrise,
And then dreams accrue at night.
Ranee, I want to pedal with you this a thousand mile,
Through the horizon to the wild hills,
Prime-time will get nowhere to ascend but only trail us-
To the city of magnificent distances!
Andrea! We see and veer for we are like soul mates.
Let’s live a double life barnstorming Andrea!

Andrea! Memoirs about you will never seize to fade away,
Never fade away from my heart,
Just because my heart peeked farther,
And because you’re ubiquitous!
Clay is molded in my heart,
Just to keep a simulacrum of you, Andrea!
Bizarre we will be, a force to be reckoned,
We will tamp and mingle the galaxy till we vanquish it.
We will laugh, smile and cuddle all in one lot.
Andrea! Just focus your eyes on the road and nothing will go wrong!
Your Beauty is a masterpiece my Mona Lisa!
Andrea you’re my finest admiration.
Andrea! I want to share the dawn and the full moon with you.
Andrea your love is a glowing neon sign of paradise,
Your love is blithe, unhinged, my Andrea!
I love you against all the odds Andrea.
Correct me, if I’m wrong, Andrea!
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© T.m.T scripts

This Poem is Dedicated to “Andrea’
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kimathi Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 10:12 AM
A beautiful dedication to Andrea! Congrats for your great WIN Bryan!
Oule Avatar
June 1, 2015 at 3:27 AM
Yeah Andrea was lucky, Thank you #Teddy for supporting me by view my winning Poem. Thanks
A  Avatar
May 28, 2015 at 3:04 PM
By the way, Congratulations, that is all :-) **SKAT WAS HERE** <---- copy paste.... hardy har har ....
Oule Avatar
June 1, 2015 at 3:32 AM
SKAT, thank you, i know you have read this poem before, but thank you again for passing by Bryan will always Recollect you, thank you for always supporting me Lots of Love
A  Avatar
May 28, 2015 at 3:04 PM
Bryan, thank you so much for the awesome entry
Oule Avatar
June 1, 2015 at 3:33 AM
Thank you for appreciating
Haight Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 2:40 PM
Bryan, congratulations on your well-deserved top win on your very romantic and dedicated poem! A pleasure to read! Sandra
Oule Avatar
June 1, 2015 at 3:30 AM
And my smiles too for winning, and thank you viewing this victor poem. Sandra, thank you Hugs dear
A   Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 3:20 PM
Bryan, Conrats on your awesome win @-> Always & Forever LINDA
Oule Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 6:29 AM
Linda and always forever, thanks again for passing by after along trail of months, Nice to have you back dear one Hugs,
A  Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 7:09 PM
Hello Bryan, Wow, that's a cool dedication, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! Forever *SKAT*
Oule Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 7:43 AM
Sure #SKAT thank you dear for checking on me again and this poem in particular. I'm a winner again
Dietrich Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 4:03 PM
Hey, your X has a COOL name!! This is a great poem, And congrats for your win.
Oule Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 7:51 AM
Yah and she is your alias too So you too win Coz your back again to support my poem by reading it Hugs, Andrea
Allison Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 1:45 PM
Andrea is a very lucky lady:-) congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
Oule Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 7:46 AM
She is lucky and this time she won. #Ali thank you for supporting me on my winning poem. Bryan Loves, Hugs
Callus Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 12:14 PM
How very romantic, Bryan!! Andrea is a lucky girl...hopefully she also made you a lucky man:) All the best. // paul
Oule Avatar
March 25, 2015 at 10:30 AM
Thank you for your view, brother, as for now Andrea is my x, but it never stops my dear ones from reading like you, thank you for your view
A  Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 9:29 PM
Bryan, thank you for setting the music and the mood with your winning. Poem. Congratulations:) Take Care ~SKAT~
Oule Avatar
February 27, 2014 at 1:40 PM
Skat.. Thanks Hunie... Take care too.... That poem was based on atrue story... Im thrilled .. Love Bryan -SKat'
Mehta Avatar
February 24, 2014 at 3:57 AM
Enjoyed your write on mood music and congrats on the win,bryan
Oule Avatar
February 27, 2014 at 1:43 PM
I'm thrilled that you enjoyed the Poem... Thnx my brother
Harper Avatar
February 24, 2014 at 12:37 AM
Congratulations on your win Bryan--this was a really tough batch to judge, all so well written. I appreciated yours for your musicality and rich details. Thanks for entering my contest.
Oule Avatar
February 27, 2014 at 1:42 PM
harper...... My pleasure.. And thanks to you too for recognising my Poem; my writings.... Love Bryan...xx
A   Avatar
November 20, 2013 at 9:50 PM
Bryan, . Congratulations, thank you for the lovely entry. Goodnight. Luv~LINDA
Oule Avatar
November 21, 2013 at 10:44 AM
TNX Linda.. hugs and Kisses
Michael Ikechukwu Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 4:49 AM
Wowing, this is
Oule Avatar
September 12, 2013 at 4:57 AM
tnx
Jones Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 8:32 AM
What a wonderful song of love for a true love....enjoyed...and thank you for visiting my poem....have a great day...
Oule Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 10:36 AM
Donna, for sure i love this poem too.. Thnkz for checking....... Lovely day too dear... Love Bryan '.
Anglesey Avatar
August 10, 2013 at 9:19 PM
Andrea is a very lucky girl to be so loved....:)
Oule Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 10:35 AM
sure.... She was the sad thing we broke up... Thank you for visting karen
Dietrich Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 2:20 PM
Well, I sure love how my name is the same as the name used in this beautiful poem! I would enjoy hearing lovely words like these sung to me by my own beloved! Sweet and lyrical poem, Bryan!
Oule Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 2:52 PM
wowowowow, First thnx.... Andrea.... Well i dedicate that Poem to you dear.. From Bryan' only i wish i was your beloved one... But i promise i will recite it for you.... Thank
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