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Flowered patios, admired for their charm, Andalusian patios lovingly cared for. As new-born babies that Andalusian women take care of with gentleness, dedicating their time with the same devotion to as a baby who needs attention. Beauty with big eyes that shines in a blind world to old emotions. Patios of my Andalusia, you sow joy in front of the ones who feel love for those old ladies, whose lives flow among your cares. I wish you would always live Andalusian ladies!, so that our eyes could delight those magical patios, full of colors and dedication. Every flower has your name written on it, every new wrinkle on your face is the effort of your everyday's passion.

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Date: 6/10/2024 1:41:00 AM
Since you hail from Spain, I can feel your passion for the region where you probably live. Always my lament that I never visited Spain. Too late now. I'd die for a paella. Best of luck.
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 6/10/2024 1:58:00 PM
Hello Victor, no, I don't live in Andalusia, I am not from that region. I am from the north-western part, Galicia. I have been living in Andalusia for a few years and I love that region, that is in my heart. Never is late to take a plane to Spain to have a paella, only 2 hours flight. Not far. That depends on how you feel. Sometimes is better to be active than be sitting waiting. Life is as shooting star, it fades into nothing. Thank you my dear friend. Love/ María
Date: 6/9/2024 10:42:00 AM
This poem is a beautifully crafted homage to the Andalusian patios and the women who care for them. Through vivid imagery, heartfelt analogies, and a lyrical style, it celebrates the cultural heritage and personal devotion that make these patios special. The poem invites readers to appreciate the beauty of these spaces and recognize the love and effort that sustain them, creating a poignant and memorable tribute to the Andalusian tradition and its caretakers.
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 6/10/2024 12:49:00 AM
Good morning Silent One. Many thanks for your kind comment. Wishing you a great day.
Date: 6/8/2024 6:12:00 PM
Dear Maria, your ode just exudes and overflows with tender reverence. I really believe that you have beautifully conveyed how to sow joy within life's blindnesses. Maria, you have created a heartfelt tribute to timeless beauty and passionate dedication. blessings, my dear friend, Daniel
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 6/9/2024 1:34:00 AM
Good morning, Daniel. Thank you for your uplifting comment. Have a great Sunday. Hugs/María

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