And Women Will Save the Earth

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This is a new style I call a Tweetie. It must be numbered succinctly. Each number can't have more than 240 characters but it can have as few as 1.

1/ FOR GRACIE your grace so sensitive other’s pain penetrates so intense the hurt -you burn there’s acid in your tears one more pin hole in your heart 2/ how do we endure the monster the monster the monster -resides the white house unwanted -uninvited and you gracie erace a thousand hims he the blatant error you the corrective balance and you should know it is you mends our ailing world 3/ weak men are too heavy for the planet to carry covered in grime too filthy for the oceans to cleanse his eyes plastered he sees nothing and when it comes to light even the blind feel its touch but you gracie you’re more special than that 4/ you’re the flame that lights the sun the tender touch soothes the moon even more -the eyes -color skies blue and when you cry i feel your tender tears because that’s what you are tender too tender for a world paved hot with hate 5/ and gracie my heart leaks and gracie i want to hand you words -holds your heart steady you mean more to Earth all it holds in bouquets of miraculous paintings the kind evil folk will never sense it’s you gracie that center gem she holds like me the world recognizes 6/recognizes you’re a natural resource drapes the world in its ultimate beauty and who you are is exactly that the ultimate beauty displays the hope we are better than we think better because gracie -you’re here

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Date: 5/15/2022 8:22:00 PM
This is beautifully written!
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Date: 9/21/2021 5:42:00 PM
Great write! Enjoyed your tweetie!
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Date: 8/14/2021 11:05:00 PM
Pleased to be reading you again, Armand. I wouldn't know who Gracie is, but it is time that she and others like her took over from the proud and often corrupt cocks who have too many skeletons in their cupboards! ~ Hope you're keeping wel, my friend. Regards // paul
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Date: 1/21/2021 12:52:00 PM
Hey, I never noticed this most recent one of yours till now. Who is Gracie? I wish we had a Gracie to save my country right now. All I see ahead is corruption and ruin for the entire world. Hope you are doing well, Armand.
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Date: 9/17/2020 1:14:00 AM
you are such a sweetie to create tweetie - i especially love parts 1,2,3,4,5,6! seriously it is amazing poetry. So wonderful to see you posting your free verse is exceptional Armand:-) hugs Jan xx a HUGE fave:-)
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