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And Time Slowed Down

And time slowed down I could feel it, see it, hear it Yes, mostly I could hear it The sound of silence Only it was not silent It was a deafening roar Like a myriad clarion horns And it became totally dark With an absence of all sensation Other than sound And, as time moved slowly, inexorably To a standstill So, too, the sound moved Becoming thinner Becoming rhythmic, beating Until all I could hear was The voice of your heart Calling And I moved Although at first I could not see Or feel the ground beneath my feet Gradually my senses returned As first I became aware of The sweet heady scent of the forest And my eyes were bathed in an aura That on opening them Was coming from the golden foliage of the trees And I was neither surprised To see the raven in front of me on the path Nor alarmed when he spoke to me Reminding me of my hunger And leading me to the delicacies You had placed to sustain me on my journey And the berries quenched my thirst And sated my hunger More than any feast ever had before I followed the path until ahead of me The way was blocked By a shimmering gold web And as I approached I saw the gossamer strands begin to dissolve And coalesce into your form I lifted you and laid you down in the moss And drank you with my eyes Caressing you gently with my strong hands The voices of our hearts sang in harmony Time picked up from where it left off And we were together through autumn And the changing seasons Carefree in love and happiness

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 5/17/2009 2:00:00 PM
Nigel, congrats on being featured this week!
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Date: 5/17/2009 8:45:00 AM
This poem made my Sunday :) Sooo beautiful, Nigel. It's nice to know there are still some romantics in this world...Congratulations on being featured this week. Poetically yours, Iolanda
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Date: 5/16/2009 2:01:00 PM
Nigel, nice work and congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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Date: 5/16/2009 6:54:00 AM
Beautiful! Congratulations on your feature this week! Izzy
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Date: 5/14/2009 8:48:00 PM
Congrats on your poem being featured this week. An excellent write. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 5/12/2009 5:56:00 AM
This fits Berlioz's Fantastic Symphony and his obsession with Smithson. A fantastic fantasy....obsession, with no relief save the end. Congrats on this fine write. Love, daver
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Date: 5/12/2009 5:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/11/2009 6:06:00 PM
Thank you for sharing this story with us. Congratulations on having this well-written poem featured. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you many more. Karen
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Date: 5/11/2009 11:07:00 AM
Wow wow wow! So miss your incredible poetry! Miss YOU! Congrats dear Nigel on a most awesome featured write! Love, Shar
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Date: 5/11/2009 9:09:00 AM
Congrats Nigel on your featured poem. Vince
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Date: 5/11/2009 12:46:00 AM
Congrats on your featured poem this week Nigel.Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/10/2009 10:21:00 PM
Congratulatins on your featured poem this week. Ernilando
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Date: 10/15/2008 7:09:00 AM
I liked this little fantasy very much.Lacy
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