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And They Cry

She left home Leaving calculus of tears Encrusted under the eyes of her children She left home in blade of sorrows Leaving her children in suspense But participated in a ghost congress Our souls were left like aw in the skies Pending cries under the eyes of I Home was left devastated And the sun deviated from the east She left home like ember And silence curls up in her lap…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/28/2016 5:42:00 PM
I will try that
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Date: 2/28/2016 5:08:00 PM
Joseph,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 2/28/2016 5:37:00 PM
Hi, Joseph, you should try YouTube. I've seen some good performance by the poets here on YouTube. It's nice to meet you... Sending a Texas Hug...Linda
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Joseph Taylor
Date: 2/28/2016 5:19:00 PM
I do more of the dirge poems and now trying to perform them on stage. I do appreciate your support and will read your poems too. One thing my brother always says is that every written work of a poet is good so i encourage you too to do your style.
Date: 2/28/2016 4:57:00 PM
Well written x
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Joseph Taylor
Date: 2/28/2016 5:05:00 PM
Thanks

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