And There He Stood

an empty train,
full of riches.
touring through the pain
a tour Guide

As he walks out of the bushes
wondering around.
people with packets,
a car guard on focus
The last bit of leaves
Autumn was drawing closer

and there he stood.
an angle, a gap.
an old-lee faded building
The Garden, in proportion
Tour-est walking by.

and there he stood.
a rusted fence
the injustice!
the feeling of crime

and there he stood.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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January 17, 2025 at 5:53 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed New Year.
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January 19, 2016 at 8:53 PM
JACOBUS, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
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