And Then

And Then…

My work finished
     I glanced back at the clock
Ah… The Witching Hour
     Hung heavy on the next tock
My thoughts raced back
     To childhood days
          To scary stories
               Round campfires haze
                    To daunting dares
                         In dark woods maze
               And then… It caught my eye

A phantom shape
     That just moments before
Had been shadows tossed
     Twixt the walls and floor
And I admit
     Twas’ dimly lit
          Random shapes
               In chances knit
                    Poorly viewed
                         From where I sit
               And then… I saw it move

Just then I thought
     Tis’ time to trust and pray
And steady my hearts resolve
     Should this be the reckoning day
And then I swear
     The room grew cold
          Events purpose
               Moved to unfold
                    My chest I clutched
                         My soul to hold
               And then… I heard it speak

“Time is at hand”
     And those words comforted it seemed
And my God in a timeless moment
     I became one with all I’d dreamed
Tis’ certain this
     Event of page
          Will visit all
               Upon life’s stage
                    Fully quenching
                         Life’s burning rage
               And then…

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Date: 12/28/2017 9:46:00 PM
This dark and evocative poem gave me a frisson of pleasure and admiration at your effective creation.
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Date: 11/10/2010 9:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest James. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/17/2010 5:08:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured on homepage this week...Very interesting write..Sara
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Date: 10/15/2010 11:43:00 AM
JAMES, Congratulations! On having your poem featured this week. A poem well deserved, keep the fascinating poetry coming" Nathan D."
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Date: 10/15/2010 9:39:00 AM
GOOD MORNING! JAMES, CoNGRATULATIoNS ON HAVING YOUR POEM FEATURED THIS WEEK*luv~SKAT"
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Date: 10/12/2010 2:19:00 PM
James, hello & Congratulations! On your awesome & well done poem being featured this week: ) have a nice one,..p.d.
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Date: 10/12/2010 8:22:00 AM
This one's a two-time winner. Congrats again. Dave
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Date: 10/12/2010 6:32:00 AM
Congrats on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup home page this week. Please keep your creative caps on, let your poetry pen keep painting your poetry pads with colors of creativity. Thanks for sharing this with us and have a wonderful week ahead. Love always, Adeleke
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Date: 10/11/2010 6:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week James what a great way to have it seen. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/10/2010 7:09:00 PM
enjoyed the "stairway" form and this scarey write...and THEN... BG
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Date: 8/11/2010 1:07:00 PM
Scott, you kept me on edge with this poem...great job! - All the best, Karen
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Date: 8/9/2010 10:27:00 AM
"Quoth the raven "nevermore." Ah, a poem would stir the heart of E. A. Poe. Seriously, I enjoyed mucho. Congrats on the selection. Dave
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Date: 8/9/2010 8:14:00 AM
well written poem, enjoyed reading and congrats on the featured poem today!
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Date: 8/9/2010 6:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week James. Wishing you the best always on your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/3/2010 2:52:00 AM
you came in ready-made ........the witching hour hung heavy on the next tock, this has gotten to me!
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Date: 4/1/2010 8:29:00 PM
A fine narrative with good layout
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Date: 3/29/2010 1:30:00 PM
welcome to poetrysoup. I really enjoyed reading your poem, well written. hope to read some more of your poetry.
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Date: 3/26/2010 10:25:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup James. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/26/2010 5:44:00 AM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. a delight..luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup
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