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And the Winner Is

Battered and shaken
The motorcycle limps home
to the finish line.

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June 16, 2011 at 8:59 AM

Speaks volumes about the struggles in life. Well done. So much captured in just three lines. I was so excited to see your name in my inbox. How are you? Missed you my friend. Blessings to you. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

May 4, 2010 at 3:49 PM

Wow great Senryu Meg. I hope life is treating you better these days and that you and yours are doing well. Thank you so much for your kind comment today. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

January 30, 2010 at 9:12 AM

Interesting thoughts here in this one. I am not sure if it is a metaphor for something else or not but definitely could be. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara