'and the Walls Came Crashing Down..........'

A knock at the door, who can it be? 
Probably Sarah coming for tea. 
She usually calls on her way 
back from work to share some time with me. 
  
A look in the mirror, 
I 'tut' at my face: 
Why do people always call 
when there's junk around the place? 

I open the door - a man is standing there. 
I wish I'd worn some make up 
I wish I'd done my hair. 
It's then I spot the uniform: 

the buttons made of brass; 
the stripes that grace the khaki sleeves; 
the boots that crunch amongst the leaves. 
I question with my eyes? 

It comes as no surprise to hear him ask 
can he come in, and would I like to sit?' 
He has some rather grievous news - 
- I dread to hear it. 

I know what he is going to say. 
It's all a dream. Please go away. 
I'm not in to truth today 
I scream inside my head...... 

I know what he just said to me, 
but I didn't hear a word. 
His lips spoke out in silence, and me, 
I never heard. 

He's 'so sorry'. He gets up to go 
and heads towards the door. 
I try to rise to follow him 
but my legs will move no more; 

for they have turned to jelly and 
my head is going to burst. 
It's funny, when you're a soldier's wife, 
you always fear the worst, 

But it's only when you hear the knock, 
the knock upon the door, 
and see the face you've never seen: 
the shining boots, the uniform; 

the mouth that speaks the silent words 
the apologies and platitudes; 
'killed in action in the war" 
The widow thoughts ring clear.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Derden Avatar
June 16, 2025 at 9:52 AM
As a Veteran myself this hits so very close to home. I wrote a lot of bad poetry to deal with everything I had to deal with. I found therapy in the words, in the rhymes, in the time I spent searching for the right words & combinations to express my volatile soul.
Makama Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 9:38 AM
I had a fantastic read. I will really love to read more of your work....
Radford Avatar
June 16, 2025 at 12:36 PM
Thank you so much
Gregory Avatar
November 30, 2013 at 11:44 AM
A heart tugging piece that left bare the unacceptable emotional consequence of conflict.. well written
Radford Avatar
June 16, 2025 at 12:36 PM
Thank you for your lovely comment
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
July 13, 2008 at 4:59 AM
Being 30 years military, this one hits home pretty hard. I pray for our troops each day. One person's loss in a war is one person too many. God Bless. Vince
Radford Avatar
June 16, 2025 at 12:35 PM
Thank you ??. It’s taken me far too long to reply. God bless you too sir.
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