And the Drooling Commences

Hot apple pie is the ultimate treat For sheer taste enjoyment, it can't be beat Exciting the senses The drooling commences This mouth watering treat is ever so sweet Now pile on some ice cream high up on top Taste buds will tango and you'll tingle nonstop A sensation so heavenly You'll hear sweet melodies A mouth watering treat so give it a shot Don't worry bout the crowd you're bound to attract The envy among them will fill a big sack Just do it, don't waiver Enjoy the sweet flavour Shove it on down cause there's no turning back Hot apple pie is the ultimate treat A taste to amaze you, jump in with both feet Enjoy the thrill Till you're bloody well filled A fantastic taste treat but don't overeat © Jack Ellison 2015

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Date: 7/19/2015 4:51:00 PM
Apple pie's the best! I like mine with vanilla icecream. Yum yum! yes! Do not overheat indeed!! Like this one- brings back great memories. Always, Laura
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Jack Ellison
Date: 7/19/2015 6:17:00 PM
Always been a favourite of mine since I was a wee tike... THAT'S A LONG TIME!!! LOL Love, Jack xxx
Date: 7/10/2015 5:34:00 PM
Yum Yum...we'll all be over...delicious
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Jack Ellison
Date: 7/10/2015 6:50:00 PM
We're a-waiting, dear Judy! Love and huggsies, Jacko xxx
Date: 7/10/2015 10:05:00 AM
For my 37th anniversary Hubby took me to OutBack Steak House. I'd always wanted to go there. I ordered ribs... Then the spices mixed with my medicines badly! I Couldn't eat and started sweating. Not wanting to ruin the mood and good deed I tried to hide it. It must have been bad because Hubby noticed immediately! We took all the food home and Hubby will be dining well for a week! Darn it. Even without Dragon I can't skip the drama of disaster! But it'll make a great story to tell everyone... LOL
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Jack Ellison
Date: 7/10/2015 3:29:00 PM
I used to be an ice cream fanatic but have since moved on to poutine!!! LOL Huggs, Jack xxx
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Date: 7/10/2015 10:11:00 AM
PS. If we ever go back... I'll order the steak... next time! In the mean time Hubby promised to get me my very own ice cream cone... I LOVE ICE CREAM... Isn't he romantic... I'll follow him anywhere for an ice cream... LOL... Yes. I would. Honest!
Date: 7/10/2015 8:58:00 AM
Mmm...think I'll have that for breakfast
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Jack Ellison
Date: 7/10/2015 9:00:00 AM
ENJOY! Break the rules but don't let your kiddies see you!!!
Date: 7/10/2015 6:48:00 AM
- Tasteful and thank you for today's smile, Jack :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jack Ellison
Date: 7/10/2015 7:21:00 AM
YOU are ALWAYS welcome my dear Miss Anne Lise! Love and big Canadian hugs, Jack xxx
Date: 7/10/2015 4:32:00 AM
sounds delicious Jack - make sure it has a touch of cinnamon in and I'll be right over:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jack Ellison
Date: 7/10/2015 7:19:00 AM
We're waiting... safe trip! Hugs, Jack xxx
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