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Suns Shall Rise (created by me with DALL-E)

Life will have days that you will wish to revise Things said or done will fill you with compromise Decisions over which you will agonize And still, the sun will rise At times others will seek to antagonize Nights filled with anger shall certainly arise For, sometimes, your reflection, you will despise And still, the sun will rise There will be hard days with long heartfelt goodbyes When all we can still do is but eulogize Leaving those left with love but still tearful eyes And still, the sun will rise There will always be dark nights with cloudy skies But things, as is their way, will yet stabilize Finding new joys, as well as new, true allies As life will go on with its new lows and highs And still, the sun will rise

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Date: 5/10/2024 12:06:00 PM
A very thoughtful lyric with clever rhyme. I think your song reflects our human need for constancy and structure - "and still the sun will rise" - however things go. Love the way you have ended each line rhyming with rise... Not very easy to do :-D
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