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And So On

the edge of the universe, the milky way, the sun, the planet, the continent, the country, the city, the apartment building, the old concierge friendly face, the creaky elevator, nobody's home, the elevator, the friendly face, the building, the city, the country, the continent and so on. going far away, make sure you did not forget documents and keys

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Date: 8/21/2019 2:52:00 PM
This Haibun has a melancholy feel to it Kurt. A kind of sadness I can't quits identify the essence of. xxoo
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 8/22/2019 10:59:00 AM
Oh, thank you for this sadness, Connie. I think you know better than many of us what a far away journey is. Rays of love)

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