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And so it goes

Easy to say that she just walked away His pride after all he must always stand tall No matter the cost just her love he has lost He could never compete with her lifestyle elite As she feared from the start he would just break her heart He became jealous and sad over things that she had She tried to include him Her love passed right through him His words lost all meaning and hers she was screening Two different worlds colliding as one All ragged and jagged until there was none The saddest part at this journeys end Is losing your love and in turn my best friend...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/27/2021 9:57:00 PM
Betrayed by those closest hurts hardest, beautifully penned, Sharon
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Date: 1/25/2011 10:19:00 PM
oh, my, the ending kind of a surprise. So this was about you and someone you loved then. I really like this one Sharon , and thanks for your comments today. LUv Andrea
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Date: 11/21/2010 10:31:00 AM
A situation so out there today as in the past, and I dare say tomorrow > emotional piece Sharon >> James :)
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Date: 11/19/2010 10:50:00 AM
Frienship lost is a tough one...sentimental write my dear poet..Love Michael
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Date: 11/19/2010 7:35:00 AM
Yes such is luv ..such is friendship .. such are the consequences Sharon.. we have all suffered in the experience of luv and life.. an intense drama u presented in words full of emotion..full of truth too.. alas we must all move on ... learning from the recent heartache..be blessed this happy weekend..with luv..
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Date: 11/18/2010 1:34:00 PM
Indeed, it's sad when you lose not only your lover, but one who is also your best friend. I guess that's what happens when worlds "collide" instead of merge. Very sad but beautifully written poem, Sharon. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/18/2010 12:43:00 PM
a deep write Sharon,, enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 11/18/2010 12:34:00 PM
You have painted the two worlds colliding as one losing the love and in turn the best friend, Sharon
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Date: 11/18/2010 11:53:00 AM
great piece Shar, love it
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