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And So It Begins

And so it begins with just a little tease, Being her dear friend he invites her in. Holding hands with a smile made of grin, A fable of a boy and girl she imagines. She likes the boy for his wit and smarts. Spellbound he stays as she cogently talks Being charmed by her lively blue eyes, Eager for the hints of her subtle vibes. Soon they know how to talk with eyes Learning to decipher meaning of sighs. Decoding as well when silence speaks As fervent looks reveal contents of joy. Exploring feelings, exchanging stories Pleasure they find in secret messages, Inventing excuses to be in private places-- Rejoicing pure love in stolen virgin kisses. And so it begins innocently, unwittingly. February 10, 2019 Placed first in February 2019 week 4 contest by Brian Strand Placed 3rd:And so it begins poetry contest by Line Gauthier

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Valsa George

Date: 2/7/2022 4:17:00 AM

So innocently and unwittingly it has begun like most of the beginnings . Time intensifies this longing for each other and ends up in a life long relationship. Really a prelude to an eventful drama.... ! Sweet penning !

Angela Crabtree

Date: 11/29/2020 6:41:00 PM

A wonderful poem, Vijay. Young love :)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 2/22/2019 8:57:00 PM

Again, your words drift in the wind. They belong there. Congratulations Vijay, on this win. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/23/2019 7:27:00 AM

Thank you Brandy.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/21/2019 10:14:00 AM

Congrats on your wins with this work. Way to go..Yeah!! Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/23/2019 7:27:00 AM

Thank you Sara..much appreciate your visit and comments.

Joseph May

Date: 2/14/2019 12:00:00 PM

Dropping back with my Congrats on your win!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/17/2019 2:59:00 PM

Thank you Joseph.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/13/2019 1:30:00 PM

A really engaging poem - young people have to experience life, and their first kiss is magic, but a first kiss when you are older is just as exciting! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/17/2019 2:58:00 PM

Thank you Jennifer.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 2/12/2019 9:20:00 PM

Your thoughts gently touch the page. Congratulations Vijay, on this win. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/17/2019 2:58:00 PM

Thank you Brandy.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/12/2019 1:41:00 AM

- Gives me lovely memories ... no one will forget this time in life :) - A wonderful poem, Vijay - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/17/2019 2:58:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/11/2019 12:40:00 PM

yes, the slow pleasure of affection eloquently delivered through your poem, vijay...much enjoyed!...huggs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/11/2019 4:51:00 PM

Thank you Nette..appreciate your visit and comments.

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 2/11/2019 12:40:00 PM

When we were kids. All of us. A charming remembrance,Vijay.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/11/2019 4:52:00 PM

So true..that was the age of exploration. Many thanks Lawrence.

Joseph May

Date: 2/11/2019 9:22:00 AM

The sweet beginning of romance..Beautifully penned Vijay.. Best for a top win..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/11/2019 10:59:00 AM

A sweet beginning for them for sure..many thanks Joseph.

Supraja Kannan

Date: 2/11/2019 8:54:00 AM

This is so beautiful. So beautifully written. I enjoyed this cute piece. Reads like a winner. Thanks for sharing.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/11/2019 10:58:00 AM

Thank you Supraja for your kind remarks. Appreciate your visit and comments.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/11/2019 7:40:00 AM

Beautiful description of how it begins for the young, Vijay! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/11/2019 10:57:00 AM

It all starts innocently..many thanks Janice.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/11/2019 3:24:00 AM

A tender and wondrous sunrise of love that embraces the hearts of two young persons in search of bliss! A wondrous poem my friend, Vijay! Good luck!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/11/2019 10:57:00 AM

Thank you my friend...yes--they are exploring life's pleasures. many thanks for your kind feedback, Demetrios.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/11/2019 2:52:00 AM

You captured the start of young love well on your words Vijay Tom.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/11/2019 10:55:00 AM

Yes--they are just starting to explore. Thank you Tom.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/10/2019 7:41:00 PM

I love your theme that you explored with the title words, Vijay. So cutely expressed.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/11/2019 10:54:00 AM

Thank you Andrea..appreciate your visit and comments.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 2/10/2019 6:37:00 PM

Soft sigh. You write of blue eyes. Yes, and so it begins. Perhaps you melt within the color as well?? I agree, eyes can say more than words- sometimes. This is so beautiful and romantic. Your thoughts leave me breathless. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/11/2019 10:53:00 AM

Yes--eyes say a lot. Happy to read your generous feedback..appreciate your visit and comments, as always.

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/10/2019 6:03:00 PM

Great one Vijay! I like how you wrote this. Good luck in the contest. :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/11/2019 10:52:00 AM

Thank you Heidi..appreciate your kind remarks.

Silent One

Date: 2/10/2019 4:39:00 PM

Now thats a real great way at looking at it, your words will mean so much to some... well expressed Vijay..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/11/2019 10:51:00 AM

Thank you SO.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/10/2019 3:53:00 PM

What a perfect poem to read as Valentine's Day approaches, Vijay! As relationships develop, we often find we can communicate without speaking. It's like tapping into a person's consciousness and understanding everything. Excellent entry for Line's contest. Winning wishes for you, Carolyn

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/11/2019 10:51:00 AM

I am very happy to read your kind remarks..many many thanks, Carolyn.