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And so it begins

And so it begins with just a little tease,
Being her dear friend he invites her in.
Holding hands with a smile made of grin,
A fable of a boy and girl she imagines. 

She likes the boy for his wit and smarts.
Spellbound he stays as she cogently talks
Being charmed by her lively blue eyes,
Eager for the hints of her subtle vibes.

Soon they know how to talk with eyes
Learning to decipher meaning of sighs.
Decoding as well when silence speaks
As fervent looks reveal contents of joy.

Exploring feelings, exchanging stories
Pleasure they find in secret messages,
Inventing excuses to be in private places--
Rejoicing pure love in stolen virgin kisses.

And so it begins innocently, unwittingly.

February 10, 2019
Placed 3rd:And so it begins poetry contest by Line Gauthier

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Date: 2/14/2019 12:00:00 PM
Dropping back with my Congrats on your win!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/17/2019 2:59:00 PM
Thank you Joseph.
Date: 2/13/2019 1:30:00 PM
A really engaging poem - young people have to experience life, and their first kiss is magic, but a first kiss when you are older is just as exciting! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/17/2019 2:58:00 PM
Thank you Jennifer.
Date: 2/12/2019 9:20:00 PM
Your thoughts gently touch the page. Congratulations Vijay, on this win. :) Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/17/2019 2:58:00 PM
Thank you Brandy.
Date: 2/12/2019 1:41:00 AM
- Gives me lovely memories ... no one will forget this time in life :) - A wonderful poem, Vijay - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/17/2019 2:58:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise.
Date: 2/11/2019 12:40:00 PM
When we were kids. All of us. A charming remembrance,Vijay.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/11/2019 4:52:00 PM
So true..that was the age of exploration. Many thanks Lawrence.
Date: 2/11/2019 12:40:00 PM
yes, the slow pleasure of affection eloquently delivered through your poem, vijay...much enjoyed!...huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/11/2019 4:51:00 PM
Thank you Nette..appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 2/11/2019 9:22:00 AM
The sweet beginning of romance..Beautifully penned Vijay.. Best for a top win..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/11/2019 10:59:00 AM
A sweet beginning for them for sure..many thanks Joseph.
Date: 2/11/2019 8:54:00 AM
This is so beautiful. So beautifully written. I enjoyed this cute piece. Reads like a winner. Thanks for sharing.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/11/2019 10:58:00 AM
Thank you Supraja for your kind remarks. Appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 2/11/2019 7:40:00 AM
Beautiful description of how it begins for the young, Vijay! Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/11/2019 10:57:00 AM
It all starts innocently..many thanks Janice.
Date: 2/11/2019 3:24:00 AM
A tender and wondrous sunrise of love that embraces the hearts of two young persons in search of bliss! A wondrous poem my friend, Vijay! Good luck!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/11/2019 10:57:00 AM
Thank you my friend...yes--they are exploring life's pleasures. many thanks for your kind feedback, Demetrios.
Date: 2/11/2019 3:15:00 AM
Loved your love poem. The start of a love that one hopes will last forever. Great nuances of emotions in its budding form.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/11/2019 10:56:00 AM
Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks, Victor. Many many thanks.
Date: 2/11/2019 2:52:00 AM
You captured the start of young love well on your words Vijay Tom.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/11/2019 10:55:00 AM
Yes--they are just starting to explore. Thank you Tom.
Date: 2/10/2019 7:41:00 PM
I love your theme that you explored with the title words, Vijay. So cutely expressed.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/11/2019 10:54:00 AM
Thank you Andrea..appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 2/10/2019 6:37:00 PM
Soft sigh. You write of blue eyes. Yes, and so it begins. Perhaps you melt within the color as well?? I agree, eyes can say more than words- sometimes. This is so beautiful and romantic. Your thoughts leave me breathless. :) Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/11/2019 10:53:00 AM
Yes--eyes say a lot. Happy to read your generous feedback..appreciate your visit and comments, as always.
Date: 2/10/2019 6:03:00 PM
Great one Vijay! I like how you wrote this. Good luck in the contest. :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/11/2019 10:52:00 AM
Thank you Heidi..appreciate your kind remarks.
Date: 2/10/2019 4:39:00 PM
Now thats a real great way at looking at it, your words will mean so much to some... well expressed Vijay..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/11/2019 10:51:00 AM
Thank you SO.
Date: 2/10/2019 3:53:00 PM
What a perfect poem to read as Valentine's Day approaches, Vijay! As relationships develop, we often find we can communicate without speaking. It's like tapping into a person's consciousness and understanding everything. Excellent entry for Line's contest. Winning wishes for you, Carolyn
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/11/2019 10:51:00 AM
I am very happy to read your kind remarks..many many thanks, Carolyn.