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And So I Wrote a Poem

A letter arrived in my mail - two lines -  From someone in a very distant past,  Like a faded dream in my existence,   Like an aching happiness, always remained in the heart,  A friend, I didn’t see for decades,  but felt the presence, no matter what.  Those two lines brought everlasting memories,  Like the resounding waves from the immense ocean,  Reminiscences of amazing days, recollections  of unforgettable moments.   Minutes passed, hours, and an entire day,  My mind was occupied with one thought -  of an unconditional Love.   My past, a different era, surrounded by illusions,  restrictions blocking judgement,  I let go the ultimate truth of my life, my oasis,  Blinded by unexpressed emotions,  Following a mirage, Life stopped.   Years and years of separation,  Now those two lines made all the sense,  From the depth of my heart,  A creeper-like craving emanated ~ a yearning I could not deny ~ And so I wrote ...in reply,   A Poem. October 11, 2020 For "and so I wrote a poem" Premiere Poetry Contest (Placed 6th) Sponsor: John Lawless

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Date: 10/20/2020 4:40:00 PM
Back to congratulate you my friend. Such a splendid piece..I was not mistaken..this is a winner...
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/20/2020 6:11:00 PM
Thank you, Dear Friend. Your appreciative comments mean a lot - a constant source of inspiration. Love, Mala
Date: 10/20/2020 2:12:00 PM
A sweet and mysterious journey Malabika and a smooth flowing lyric expression. thanks for entering the contest
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/20/2020 2:40:00 PM
Thank you, John. I am honoured. Appreciate your beautiful and thoughtful comments. Best wishes, Malabika
Date: 10/15/2020 6:13:00 PM
Very sweet! I love how you gently render each line to create a passionate aura...Beautiful!! A sure win for me..
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/20/2020 2:48:00 PM
Dear Friend, I am inspired every time I read your encouraging comments. I feel fortunate to learn from brilliant poets like you. Love, Mala
Date: 10/14/2020 8:47:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this sentimental poem and you expressing your emotions so poetically...
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/14/2020 3:09:00 PM
Dear Poet, so delighted to find your inspiring comments. Glad you enjoyed the poem. Thank you so much.
Date: 10/11/2020 10:25:00 AM
Hello Mala, you wrote your feelings into a poem. You got the idea from the letter you received. A greet poem. Love, Darlene.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/15/2020 10:06:00 AM
Hello Mala, I enjoy to read your poetry. Enjoy your day my friend. Love Darlene
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/11/2020 10:35:00 AM
Hi Darlene, Thanks so much for reading this poem. Your inspiring comments bring the motivation to write more. Love, Mala

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