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And So I Cried

I send you flowers by the drove and all my fantasies My heart beat in a steady rove and all my love; You opted to postpone me love , your sweet affection was denied, and so I cried; While all the flowers in my grove dried up and died, I gathered up my words and all my fantasies and took them home. May 19, 2018 not for contest

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Date: 5/27/2018 11:14:00 PM
I hope you feel better -JT
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Date: 5/22/2018 1:11:00 PM
you said it and brought me the scorched clove...
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Date: 5/19/2018 3:44:00 PM
Rather leave the desert than have dreams and fantasies blistered by its sun...
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Date: 5/19/2018 7:10:00 PM
rather leave then get burned Frederic, thanks for reading my poem
Date: 5/19/2018 3:02:00 PM
Sadness seems to be a constant shadow of love, though the greatest feeling in the world, when loves leaves it can be devastating. Very nicely penned
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Date: 5/19/2018 7:10:00 PM
When love leaves, we feel the sadness indeed. Thanks for reading Chris
Date: 5/19/2018 8:40:00 AM
I find so much strength in this, Pixie, says so much of the poet...
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Date: 5/19/2018 7:10:00 PM
The heart is tender and so the poet must remember not to have it trampled on, thanks for reading Harry
Date: 5/19/2018 7:09:00 AM
I feel your sadness Pixie Dust and I can relate. Keep your chin up, your time will come.
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Date: 5/19/2018 7:09:00 PM
I always do my best Phil, thanks for reading
Date: 5/19/2018 7:02:00 AM
An unrequited love...Nicely penned
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Date: 5/19/2018 7:09:00 PM
I agree Joseph, there is no love lost when it is unrequited and one sided. thanks for reading Joseph
Date: 5/19/2018 6:36:00 AM
Well done with a powerful ending :)
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Date: 5/19/2018 7:08:00 PM
When love is not returned the best that one can do is return it to it's rightful owner, thanks for reading Heidi
Date: 5/19/2018 6:17:00 AM
A well crafted discourse of romance..a bit sad, but true to life.
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Date: 5/19/2018 6:23:00 AM
Thank you for reading Vijay, I agree , it's true to life. Have a great day

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