Mystic Rose Rose Poet Rhyme

And So I Cried

I send you flowers by the drove 
and all my fantasies 
My heart beat in a steady rove  
and all my love;
You opted to postpone me love ,   
your sweet affection 
was denied, and so I cried; 
While all the flowers in my grove
dried up and died,  
I gathered up my words 
and all my fantasies 
and took them  home. 



May 19, 2018 

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Honestly J.T. May 27, 2018 at 11:14 PM I hope you feel better -JT

Pashang Salehi May 22, 2018 at 1:11 PM you said it and brought me the scorched clove...

Frederic Parker May 19, 2018 at 3:44 PM Rather leave the desert than have dreams and fantasies blistered by its sun... Mystic Rose Rose May 19, 2018 at 7:10 PM rather leave then get burned Frederic, thanks for reading my poem

Chris Green May 19, 2018 at 3:02 PM Sadness seems to be a constant shadow of love, though the greatest feeling in the world, when loves leaves it can be devastating. Very nicely penned Mystic Rose Rose May 19, 2018 at 7:10 PM When love leaves, we feel the sadness indeed. Thanks for reading Chris

Harry Horsman May 19, 2018 at 8:40 AM I find so much strength in this, Pixie, says so much of the poet... Mystic Rose Rose May 19, 2018 at 7:10 PM The heart is tender and so the poet must remember not to have it trampled on, thanks for reading Harry

Phil Capitano May 19, 2018 at 7:09 AM I feel your sadness Pixie Dust and I can relate. Keep your chin up, your time will come. Mystic Rose Rose May 19, 2018 at 7:09 PM I always do my best Phil, thanks for reading

Joseph May May 19, 2018 at 7:02 AM An unrequited love...Nicely penned Mystic Rose Rose May 19, 2018 at 7:09 PM I agree Joseph, there is no love lost when it is unrequited and one sided. thanks for reading Joseph

Heidi Sands May 19, 2018 at 6:36 AM Well done with a powerful ending :) Mystic Rose Rose May 19, 2018 at 7:08 PM When love is not returned the best that one can do is return it to it's rightful owner, thanks for reading Heidi

Vijay Pandit May 19, 2018 at 6:17 AM A well crafted discourse of romance..a bit sad, but true to life. Mystic Rose Rose May 19, 2018 at 6:23 AM Thank you for reading Vijay, I agree , it's true to life. Have a great day