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I was counting days 'till he would be mine, I was ticking off nine. One morning I felt not a thing, so my husband gave the doctor a ring. And so comes this love . . . My baby had flown up above, he had left in the night for the divine; and in my heart he will ever twine, to my sweet boy I just wanted to cling; and a lullaby sing. And so comes this love . . . Then, I had to let go of my dove- Often, I walk among the yellow pine, to where he rests in the sun . . . shine. ______________________ April 6, 2018 Poetry/Rhyme/And so comes this love Copyright Protected, ID 18- 1010-737-01 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Any Rhyming Poem in April sponsor, Laura Loo First Place ____________________________________ Written for the contest, Non Romantic Love sponsor, Emile Pinet, Judged April 11, 2018, Seventh Place

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Date: 5/16/2018 2:49:00 PM
Constance, I came to see YOUR trophy wins on your current page. This one was so deserving, one I had seen before and admired. Let me see your other one now!
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Date: 5/3/2018 8:56:00 AM
Deep, sad, but so beautifully expressed, Constance. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/30/2018 7:17:00 PM
Such poignantly expressed heartache and heartbreak, Broken Wings. Congratulations on your win with your beautifully sad and soulful poem..
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Date: 4/30/2018 4:03:00 PM
What a lovely and divine poem, BW.
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Date: 4/30/2018 9:41:00 AM
Lovely! Congrats :)
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Date: 4/30/2018 6:08:00 AM
Such a beautiful, sweet, sad poem, Constance, congrats on your win. John
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Date: 4/30/2018 6:06:00 AM
Back to congratulate you again, this one a #1 win. A heartbreaking poem written so well.
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Date: 4/30/2018 5:52:00 AM
Oh my word...you know I feel your pain sweet lady...that's why this hit me so hard. You spoke the words right from my heart...thank you and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 4/20/2018 10:26:00 PM
'among the yellow pine...he rests in the sun' . He rest, he sleeps. You know where he rests, so does God. Job chapter 14 is comforting. He said "God will have a longing for the works of his own hand" . Isn't that a beautiful way to express our resurrection hope? later Job said about himself sleeping in death. That God will call and he (Job) will answer. Hope you have Job's assurance. Congrats dear friend.
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Date: 4/14/2018 11:45:00 AM
So sad and heartbreaking loss, Constance. hugs Congrats on your win! :,) ~ Artsie
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Date: 4/13/2018 5:27:00 AM
O BW, what a lovely tribute. Congrats on you most deserving win.
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Date: 4/12/2018 2:14:00 AM
That is so sad and so powerful at the same time. Congratulations on your win and your warm insightful words. Many wishes, Kai
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Date: 4/11/2018 7:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this heartbreaking poem that is also so beautifully written.
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Date: 4/11/2018 7:19:00 PM
Congratulations on excellent win on this heartfelt touching write, Broken Wings.Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/11/2018 3:55:00 PM
My daughter lost her first baby and I know how devastating it is. I also lost a baby sister who only lived 25 minutes, which my mother never got over. So sorry for your loss. You have expressed your loss so poignantly in this beautiful poem Constance. Congratulations on your win! xxoo : )
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Date: 4/11/2018 3:25:00 PM
So sad, dear heart. Congrats on your well deserved win in this contest. I wish you could have mothered him.
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Date: 4/11/2018 3:09:00 PM
such a heartbreaking poem Constance, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/11/2018 2:16:00 PM
Congratulations Constance, your poem earned a place in my contest, it was a very tough contest to judge, well done my friend, Emile.
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Date: 4/9/2018 8:25:00 PM
Its beautiful write
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Date: 4/6/2018 10:41:00 PM
The last line sums up the sadness!
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Date: 4/6/2018 3:32:00 PM
devastatingly beautiful, constance... i have no words as sadness grips me now... huggs
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