Seren Roberts Poet Rhyme

And Since You Know You Cannot See Yourself Etc: Julius Caesar

QUOTATION
And since you know you cannot see yourself,
so well as by reflection, I, your glass,
will modestly discover to yourself,
that of yourself which you yet know not of.   Julius Caesar Act 1

MY POETIC VERSION : …………

As you cannot see what I see
Just like a mirror I will reflect to thee
I will be your mentor and your guide
Taking your hand crossing the thinking tide

I can see hope where failure meets your eyes
Can see the truth behind meaningful lies
The other side of you is in my sight
I offer you the chance to put things right

Fearless i will shout your name
Be your advisor in this living game
Will tell u what to do and when to say
I am your thinking mind this day

Your heart rules your head it must not so
Think which way you wish to go
Is it greatness you want, then you can find
I will be the thoughts in your mind

Penned  May 10th  2014

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David Williams May 11, 2014 at 3:47 AM Seren love this thought provoking take of yours,, hope you are well....David Seren Roberts May 11, 2014 at 10:51 AM hello David lovely to see you here. Thanks for the comment. ....Seren

Darren Watson May 10, 2014 at 11:13 AM I used to find Shakespeare so hard going Until I learned to translate what he had said into modern words , You have done that beautifully here , Lovely read Seren. Seren Roberts May 10, 2014 at 2:26 PM Thanks Darren .... Seren

Dr.Ram Mehta May 10, 2014 at 7:26 AM Very thought provoking and interesting expressions to bring out the essence of the quote from the bard, seren Seren Roberts May 10, 2014 at 7:38 AM Hi Ram, I smile at your comments, I wonder sometimes what you think is going through my mind, I always seem to do things differently. I appreciate your words....Seren