And it's looking bright

Glowing smile beaming with joy
the bride-to-be vying her future
she's truly found her soulmate


Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: 3rd place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Inman Avatar
September 29, 2018 at 2:41 PM
I like what Michelle wrote. This could be interpreted many ways. She could be envisioning a beautiful future ahead or already moving on to someone or something better (trading up or perhaps taking her new husband to the cleaners).
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September 29, 2018 at 6:03 PM
Yes James. I love it when the readers fill in the intended blanks. Line xx
Wolf Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 8:40 PM
Ah, this one is a pretty picture indeed, with promises to keep! Excellent. ~ gw
Gauthier Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 8:41 PM
Thank you, Gershon. Most appreciated.
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September 27, 2018 at 6:53 PM
Love how this is just ambiguous enough to suggest there may be more to this story?
Gauthier Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 8:42 PM
Thank you for your lovely visit, Michelle.
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