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And Immortalize You In My Fire

the present hides itself secretly behind invisible walls of fantasy my fingertips explore a statue so vividly before me I bury my fear among the pedestal and you can come from your base find a resting place on my warm grounds let the bronze melt into love reveal the emerald color of your heart I want to love you endlessly free your soul from petrified tears and immortalize you in my fire @ Bianca & Gerhard

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/21/2015 5:50:00 PM

BIANCA:) Thank you so much for the reply. That was nice of you to comment my comment. ((Regarding the reply you left in my comment box)) Always ~LINDA~

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 9/10/2014 4:44:00 PM

This is a beautiful poem, that comes from the heart and soul. I welcome you to Poetry Soup, where I hope you find that we are a pretty good bunch. I don't write everyday as my health is not good. I will read more of your poems. Blessings always ... Lucilla

Bianca And Gerhard
Date: 9/10/2014 5:10:00 PM

First all the good health wishes for you Lucilla, thanks for the commend and nice to meet you here !

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/10/2014 4:12:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Bianca and Gerhard-I choose your first lovely written poem- You write skillfully - Nice to meet you - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem today - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 9/9/2014 6:06:00 PM

This is such a deep powerful romantic piece and an excellent write! A warm welcome to PoetrySoup, and happy writings! Pandita

Bianca And Gerhard
Date: 9/10/2014 3:55:00 AM

Thank you very much Pandita, welcome too.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/9/2014 11:13:00 AM

Gerhard, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Bianca And Gerhard
Date: 9/9/2014 1:07:00 PM

Thank you very much Poet Destroyer, I am gonna try to find out how things work :) nice to meet you as a new friend, greetings from Holland !

Bongani Zungu

Date: 9/9/2014 9:21:00 AM

Hi Gerhard, welcome to our community and i hope you'll continue sharing your poems with us. i enjoyed reading this poem!!!!!!!! Well penned.

Bianca And Gerhard
Date: 9/9/2014 10:15:00 AM

Thank you very much Bongani We sure will, I write them together with Bianca.