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And Broken Back Broken Neck

Angels and guides tried their best to console Icarus Why did I not listen to my father? He lamented. Determined to hang onto his sorrow and sadness It is time to stop belittling yourself, his head angel said. One mistake; this is how we learn; no big deal. But why do I have to learn the hard way with broken bones? And broken back and broken neck, his negative side added. His positive side threw up her hands.

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Date: 11/4/2022 1:05:00 PM
Good one, Caren. It's so difficult for the positive side to get control, isn't it?
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/4/2022 5:28:00 PM
With some people I wonder if there IS a positive side and many of them GRAVITATE toward me.

Book: Shattered Sighs