Ancient We

I don't know if you follow this our evolution I mean things we would avoid if we still shared the same hate these days I was looking for a way out my way of saying peace but I haven't had success with success again I came home again thing that wasn't even me I saw your horrible picture in the hallway even the leaves of grass wet with rain were more interesting than you I didn't sleep well that night there's so much light and life around here I need to buy a blackout curtain at once

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L Milton Hankins

Date: 4/27/2022 8:42:00 AM

I'm not sure I understand this one, but I know I would be removing a picture from the hallway. It seems to me that you had a rotten day and you may be taking it out on the wrong person? If you told "someone" even wet grass is more interesting than they are, well, that's pretty strong. I see you crossing a bridge; a blackout curtain probably won't do it.