Ancient Warrior

I see the wrinkles in your suntanned brow,
You carried burdens then; you see them now.
You’ve heard the cries your people who in pain,
Have shed their tears two hundred years like rain. 

Your sad brown eyes, reflecting now the sky
I see the wings of eagles flying by
Beside you stands an Appaloosa mare
Her spirit one with you now over there.

You hear the drums, they bid you to come near,
Your spirit drawn the beats they ring so clear.
Song like prayers are chanted through the night,
Calling you come, and help them end their plight.  

You’ve heard sad cries and now stand at their side,
You join the prayers with both arms open wide,
United spirits sing until the dawn,
When in the fire’s flames a golden fawn.

Remembering a smile crosses your face,
When tribes were one with Mother Nature’s grace.
The lakes and streams flowing with waters clear,
Flow sadly now, the planet lives in fear.

The weightless feathers that adorn your head
Your tribes grey future weighed you down instead.
Now breathing deep you smell the winds of change
While here on earth your people rearrange.

Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 
10.21.2014
Giorgio A.V. Contest 
Iambic Pentameter 
1st place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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De Beaulieu Avatar
February 24, 2019 at 12:32 PM
Hello Brenda, You paint a pretty picture with your words. Have a nice day my friend.
Gauthier Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 12:32 PM
Beautiful, Brenda. Love your poem.
Chaganti Avatar
June 15, 2016 at 8:13 AM
Had a very lovely time reading this.. I loved the theme and feel of it..
Thirtyseven Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 6:29 AM
A most enjoyable read, and well deserved winner.
A   Avatar
December 26, 2014 at 9:19 PM
BRENDA, CONGRATS on your win, in Giorgio A. V's contest... Take Care ~LINDA
Dietrich Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 3:03 PM
wow, way to place high in a contest, Brenda. And what an amazing poem for native americans.
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 22, 2014 at 6:09 AM
Thanks so much Andrea.
Zerbst Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 10:07 AM
I like that there is so much feeling here, as I think there should be for such a topic. Very much enjoyed reading! Top congrats to you.
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 19, 2014 at 11:39 AM
Thank you so much Isaiah.
Chakrabarty Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 6:46 AM
Love Brenda you deserved the win. Congrats.This "Ancient Warrior" belongs to all ages. You are a blessed poet.Your poem rightly says that the indomitable spirit is the essential constituent inherent in men.Great message. hugs!-rajat
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 8:16 PM
Thanks for your complement Rajat
Fisher Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 5:20 PM
Way to go on this contest, Brenda! I love how smoothly the lines roll off the tongue.
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 8:13 PM
Thanks so much David
Carmack Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 7:55 AM
Congrats Brenda.
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 8:12 PM
Thanks Rob
Mehta Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 4:44 AM
Beautifully written poem, congratulations on the first place win, Brenda
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 6:57 AM
Thank you Dr. Mehta.
Allison Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 7:55 PM
Many congrats again Brenda:-) Hugs jan x
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 6:57 AM
Thank you Jan.
Yvonne Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 4:48 PM
I wish I could fav this one again!
Yvonne Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 4:46 PM
WOWOWOW, Brenda you are the top gun. Congratulations on your first place win!
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 6:56 AM
Thank you so much Maurice.
Stoner Jr Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 3:24 PM
Brenda another great win, I need to put you on speed dial,lol Congratulations
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 6:56 AM
Thanks Robert.
Johnson Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 2:25 PM
A great poem and win. congratulations.
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 6:55 AM
Thanks Joyce.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 2:19 PM
Way to go Brenda, congratulations!
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 6:54 AM
Thank you Richard.
Haight Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 1:44 PM
Wow! Brenda, big congratulations to you! We share the podium once again in the same day! I love your warrior poem! Hugs, Sandra
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 6:54 AM
Thank you so much Sandra.
Kayode Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 1:28 PM
You stand taller than your pairs,congrats Brenda;love, pecks ,kisses and huggs
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 6:53 AM
Thanks so much Kayod5
Roper Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 8:27 PM
Beautiful painting, Brenda. Blessings dear friend and 7
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 15, 2014 at 3:48 PM
Thank you Eve
Hamilton Avatar
December 3, 2014 at 2:53 PM
oh Brenda this is exquisite you paint him so perfectly sublime poem hugs 7 + fav
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 15, 2014 at 3:47 PM
Thanks so much Shadow.
Duncan Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 10:36 PM
Awesome words you have here. I hope you won with this :) going to favs !
Thorisdottir  Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 8:40 AM
Love the historical imagery, a fine creation.
Thorisdottir  Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 11:10 PM
I really like the history here, and how it was poignant and personal at the same time.
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 15, 2014 at 3:47 PM
Thank you Ingvar
Lindley Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 9:36 PM
Congrats on a great write and the win as well. I thank you for this tribute to Native Americans, the people of my grandfather.. A super 7 on this gem and adding this one to my fav list..
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 10:50 PM
Thanks so much Robert. I'm glad you like this.
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