Ancient Tree

Like a smoker's cough
the dark bark of your rough skin
Married many times
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rodgers Avatar
March 4, 2025 at 5:54 AM
Dear Crystol, I just loved your haiku for it is simple yet impactful, capturing the essence of endurance and history within nature. I think that just like an ancient tree, you carry wisdom, strength, and resilience. Your presence is deeply rooted, offering shade and comfort to those around you. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Woods Avatar
March 4, 2025 at 7:50 AM
How beautiful Daniel, I'll treasure this note forever and pray what you say is true. Bless you friend, xoxo
Cunningham Avatar
March 3, 2025 at 10:35 PM
Love the image Crystol, bet it can tell many stories. Tom
Woods Avatar
March 4, 2025 at 7:50 AM
Thank you Tom xo
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