Ancient storm

Where do I begin, 
within a deep, intricate ravine of what I have seen,
where I have been, to the breathing, living hell.
Down there, it’s a knife’s edge,
A broken ledge, where defeat becomes foundation,
the destination that leads to transformation.
Devastation, fuel for impossible imagination.
Broken down…
Piece by piece…
Torn open into a million species.
Cuts so deep it releases, 
revealing truth, untouched, unrepressed,
completely undressed of all that’s come to rest
I am bleeding…
healing…
Feeling…
Down there, I found a treasure so rare,
I dare use words to bring to life,
 what was once resting on the edge of life’s knife.
But a seed spawned and the roots cracked through,
twisting…
existing between what grew and how I knew you.
A new mind was born from this ancient storm,
A new heart, warm…
Absorbed in the fall…
Oh, what a sensual experience after all.
I brought the shadow to the light, I witnessed your bare,
Vulnerable…
Fervent…
My darkest servant.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Smith  Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 9:27 PM
This is a powerful, deeply resonant piece of free verse that masterfully mirrors its emotional journey through its structural choices. The fearless exploration of the shadow self and the sensual integration of pain into light makes the content both hauntingly intimate and universally profound.
Baptie Avatar
September 4, 2026 at 3:11 PM
Wow, thank you so much for connecting to my poem so deeply. I love that it resonated with you. Your words are so appreciated
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