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Ancient Pathway

through grey foggy fields I trip over well-worn trails~ eye corneal scarring Written: August 24, 2022

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Date: 8/25/2022 12:33:00 PM
. Great, a deep metaphorical meaning Las :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/25/2022 10:46:00 AM
Hope this is fiction. The eyes are often hard to heal.
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Date: 8/25/2022 4:46:00 AM
An image in every line--exploring ancient pathway.
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Date: 8/24/2022 11:23:00 PM
With a scarred cornea, we are likely to trip even over well worn trails ! A great haiku.
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