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poem submitted to "1482" poetry contest, Brian Strand, sponsor, 6/17/2026
ANCIENT PATHS
I walk the old paths now,
the ones worn smooth by those
who learned to listen before they spoke,
who learned to bend before they broke.
These paths know me.
They knew me even before
the long nights in hospital rooms,
before the quiet terror
of watching my mother fade
and flare
and fade again.
They knew of the weight I carried
in my own bones~
the ache that taught me
how fragile a body can be,
how fierce a spirit must become.
On these ancient trails,
I pray asking,
Ancient One, give me enough strength
to stand upright in my story.
He replies:
Walk slowly, daughter~
wisdom waits for those
who do not rush their becoming.
I learned this truth
in the desert wind of El Paso,
where the land itself negotiates
with heat and horizon,
where even tumbleweeds
carry the art of surrender.
There, I found my breath again~
thin at first, then steadier,
as if the Chihuahuan light
was teaching me
how to rise without haste.
Life has never offered me
a clean contract.
It brings its terms in fragments:
a doctor’s whisper,
a mother’s fragile hand,
a body that falters,
a heart that refuses to quit.
So I meet each moment
like an elder at the fire,
palms open,
voice low,
praying not for ease
but for clarity.
And the path~
older than grief,
older than hope,
leans close and says:
Walk on, daughter.
You have learned this ancient art:
To live wisely is to keep choosing ‘forward,’
even when the way bends into mystery.
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