Ancient Hero, Firm and Honorable Til Death

I am very pleased to present a fourth collaboration, this time in rhyme
with my dear friend Lawrence Sharp, a truly exceptional poet. 
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Thank you, Lawrence, for your great inspiration
and ongoing fellowship.

Ancient Hero, Firm And Honorable Til Death


Twas not roses painted bright red upon his shield
he that with great courage refused to ever yield;
with beating heart and full faith in his saving God
slayed monstrous beasts, going where only heroes trod
with no complaint of hardest sacrifices made,
he gave back no ground and bright red-blood wet his blade.

Family crest of roses and red bird of prey.
Its motto, 'True to our beloved God we stay'.

Decades flown by, great battles fought under red sun
bravery gave strength to finish what was begun;
strongest spirit with true soul to match and hold true
to the solemn vows and painful costs surely due
his right arm, servant of Light, Truth and Divine God,
with love of family and his faith, his firm rod.

Family crest of roses and red bird of prey.
Its motto, 'True to our beloved God we stay.'

War's end, dusk of last decade under  cloud's cover
would be pride and pain greatest to lifelong lover;
fiercest and most wicked was the very last foe,
The Serpent King blithely cast gods and angels low;
most prized the triumph or most abject the defeat,
in driving rain the greatest challenge he would meet.

Family crest of roses and red bird of prey.
Its motto, 'True to our beloved God we stay'.

Unclean was the battle and untold was its cost,
lives of men and monsters were sacrificed, not lost;
The Ancient Hero stood and faced The Serpent King,
final bloody battle he knew would bring death's sting;
perished with his bane, war's demons and gods destroyed,
mightiest foe with him he took into the void.

Family crest of roses and red bird of prey.
Its motto, 'True to our beloved God we stay'.

A collaboration with Lawrence Sharp
9th November 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Duet Avatar
November 15, 2018 at 8:20 PM
This poem is so exceptional and a delight to read as it brings the reader into the battle too. A FAV for sure. I can see you guys make a great pair for collaborations.
Lindley Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 9:50 AM
Thank you again my dear friend. I am indeed truly blessed to be able to write with such a gifted poet as my dear friend Lawrence most assuredly is!
Sharma Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 8:03 PM
Very beautiful
Lindley Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 9:48 AM
Thank you my friend, very pleased you enjoyed this collaboration..
Duet Avatar
November 11, 2018 at 5:28 PM
A great and epic poem of bravery and sacrifice...perfect for Veteran's Day...and FAVED. Congrats on a fine collaboration.
Lindley Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 9:47 AM
Thank you my dear friend. Today I start trying to play catch up here since my recent hospital excursion set me back a bit. Your inspiring words are truly appreciated and your fav is doubly so.
Raven Avatar
November 11, 2018 at 5:19 PM
Hi Robert, an excellent collaboration by you both. In the myths of Gods and Heroes, this poem shall stand. A man true to his code to the end. This story does thrill the soul. You have both created the kind of poetic tale I love to read. THIS IS A FAVE. A tale to move my manly spirit. This has been a pleasure to read. You both contribute so much in this thrilling life and end of a warrior. Congratulations to you both on an excellent poetic gem. Have a wonderful Monday. Your friend always....Mike.
Lindley Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 9:45 AM
Thank you my dear friend for your wonderful comments and your great friendship. I recognize my blessing at having a truly fine poet writing with me. One that constantly amazes me with such brilliant verses. Additional thanks on the fav too..
Warrior Avatar
November 11, 2018 at 5:59 AM
Magnificent collab my dear friends...you are the dynamic duo of the soup bowl...love & light...^WW^
Lindley Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 9:43 AM
Thank you my dear friend for commenting and giving such praise on this our latest collaboration. Lawrence and I do seem to ride the same train when composing together. His verses always awe me..
Riabi Dziri Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 2:05 PM
A veteran of Life, a master of Poetry along with our fellow poet Lawrence Sharp celebrate honour, dignity, valiance, sacrifice, pride.. the finest qualities Man can acquire.. A beauty in substance and form.. worthy of rereads for its depth and wealth.. a FAV as it is a gem from your mine Robert.. my deepest regards Lawrence and Robert..
Lindley Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 9:41 AM
My dear friend, I so appreciate your insightful words and your welcomed comments and reading of our creation. Your fav is a great honor and we thank you for it.
Ashley Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 1:00 PM
My dear friend, Robert, your immense talent presents itself in this impassioned poem of an embattled hero in his epic journey of courage and his ultimate but honorable demise. A thrilling collaboration with the wonderfully creative and talented, Lawrence Sharp. Such dynamic and dramatic poetry! An inspiring poem of commitment, bravery and the ultimate sacrifice. A superb gem that shines in its mastery of spirited and stirring imagery. Warmest wishes always my wonderful friend.. ~Susan
Lindley Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 9:39 AM
My very dear friend. Such comments coming from a poet of your immense talents is welcomed and truly appreciated. Lawrence and I both put a lot into this piece and the results was a creation that we are both very proud to present. Lawrence is truly a brilliant poet and a very kind friend..
George   Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 2:03 AM
An incredible collaboration my friend! BRAVO! Sincerely, Elaine
Lindley Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 9:36 AM
Thank you my dear friend. Such praise coming from you is indeed quite a true and great honor!
Sharp Avatar
November 9, 2018 at 11:23 PM
Thank you, Robert, for another poem shared. Your pen is so inspirational, my friend.
Lindley Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 9:35 AM
Sorry my dear friend but my recent illness has led me to not respond sooner to this your comment on our wonderfully pleasing collaboration. My friend, the greatest inspiration comes from your pen and your friendship. I have started another collaboration and shall send it to you as soon as I finish. God bless..
Cunningham Avatar
November 9, 2018 at 4:15 PM
What a brilliant verse Robert and Lawrence. A masterpiece of words. Tom.
Lindley Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 9:32 AM
Thank you dear friend. Lawrence and I found this to be a great and pleasurable collaboration. I always find his verse to be brilliant and poetically on cue, with great deep insight and profundity.
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November 9, 2018 at 4:01 PM
Kudos for your collaboration Robert and Lawrence. You wrote an epic poem of heroic accomplishments..bravery, and sacrifice. Well done friends.
Lindley Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 9:30 AM
Thank you dear friend. Your words are truly appreciated as is your friendship and your own very fine poetry.
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