Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

Ancient Covered Bridge

Ancient covered bridge mouth open
Invite in the colorful yellow aspen
Weather washed planks neatly shapen
Sandy road leads into dark interior dampen

Invite in the colorful yellow aspen
Let them dance inside see what happens 
Inside your braced solid strength sharpen

Weather washed planks neatly shapen
Stretch planks of ancient times deepen
Our youth bring them forth enlighten

Sandy road leads into dark interior dampen
Damp sand of antiquity new ideas ripen
Let our nation come back enlighten 

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Lisa Mccall November 2, 2013 at 8:21 AM This is beautifully penned. Great imagery as well. Truly enjoyed.

Jake Ponce October 30, 2013 at 1:08 PM I love how my mind can see this piece as a moving oil painting. Impressive.

Kelly Deschler October 28, 2013 at 5:25 PM Wonderful, rustic autumn imagery in this poem! It made me think of "The Legend Of Sleepy Hollow". A lovely and charming poem, Sara!...Thank you for your kind visit!

John Posey October 28, 2013 at 10:31 AM Regardless of form, you pen a wonderful scene. Such picturesque phrasing almost allows the reader to hear the hoof beats of the horses pulling carriages through the darkened passage way.... Great writing... Love ya dearly..... Jake

Barbara Gorelick October 27, 2013 at 7:42 PM Im not familiar with this form..got to check it out. Lovely poem. BG

Sandra Adams October 27, 2013 at 7:00 PM you did a wonderful job with this form...so glad you gave it a try....lovely, lovely write :)

Harry Horsman October 27, 2013 at 5:32 PM another gem from you Sara...

Ken Carroll October 27, 2013 at 2:19 PM Hi Sandra, Well penned and rich with imagery.. Ken

Russell Sivey October 27, 2013 at 1:44 PM This is a beautiful write my friend! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this afternoon! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!

Bl Devnath October 27, 2013 at 12:54 PM Last line is very nice penned within rhyme. Beautiful wishes of your beautiful heart, my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Jack Horne October 27, 2013 at 11:01 AM lovely write, my friend - like the look of this form and must try it. Congrats on your win too : )