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Anatomy of a Failed Marriage

Eyes that search, but never see Hearts that yearn, yet writhe unfree Minds closed tight, that fear to think Two troths pledged ~ never linked

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 11/28/2021 6:04:00 PM
This often happens ! You have dissected the anatomy of a failed marriage incisively like a surgeon ! Wish you a happy week ahead !
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Date: 11/21/2021 4:42:00 PM
What a sad marriage!
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Date: 11/18/2021 3:01:00 PM
Hello Gershon ... courtship; engagement; marriage; once the birth for a long lasting life of love and happiness because couples got to know each other first. Today on the main, is a fairy tale - thank you Gershon - Lindsay
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/18/2021 6:08:00 PM
I'm all for traditional 'Hollywood marriages:' Wham, Bam, Slam? -- No thank you, Ma'am!! Smiles, Gershon
Date: 11/18/2021 12:33:00 PM
Hello Gershon, sometimes couples date a short time, then get married. Only to discover one of them wants a divorce. tTat is because they got married too fast without giving a chance to really know each other. enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/19/2021 11:36:00 AM
Hello Gershon, the couple got married too fast and did not know each others name! Wow! That is crazy!! Enjoy your day my friend.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/18/2021 6:06:00 PM
Ha, ha! You may be right, Darlene. Why, the other day I heard of a couple who got married so fast that they didn't even know each other's names...
Date: 11/18/2021 11:37:00 AM
Sad that is the state of some marriages but also some people who are single are the same. I enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for your visit to my page. I am anticipating that chocolate rain most any minute. Sara
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/18/2021 6:06:00 PM
Still waiting for that chocolate rain, Sara. I'm counting on you now! :)
Date: 11/18/2021 9:54:00 AM
Very sad…so sorry
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/18/2021 5:22:00 PM
So glad it’s fictional! Believe me I’m not following you around…lol.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/18/2021 10:59:00 AM
You realize that this 'failed marriage' is not mine, right? It's 'fictional,' although hopefully it rings enough bells that it sounds as if it could be true... Thanks, Kim

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