Anathema Bloom

They measured my soul
against doctrine

and found
its constellation
too wayward
to be blessed.

Thus I was entrusted
to the reliquary
of uncanonized marvels:

an alabaster raven
whose argent plumage
bewildered midnight;

a chrysoprase chalice,
hairlined with centuries,
yet sweeter
than untouched crystal;

a black asphodel
whose fragrance
outlived every psalm;

and one bent aureole,
still luminous
where perfection
would have fractured.

I entered
the vesper orchard.

Cinnabar fruit
ripened beneath eclipses.

The wind officiated,

censing the dark
with myrrh,

until respiration itself
became liturgy.

There,

obsidian lilies
raised their chalices
beyond the jurisdiction
of dawn.

No scripture
remembered them.

Yet the stars
crossed more slowly
above their perfume.

Upon an abandoned shelf

the pale circumference
of a lifted vessel
remained.

Dust had refused it.

Time had not.

Then every relic
relinquished
its disguise.

The bent aureole
had merely learned
the curvature
mercy requires.

The alabaster raven
was daylight
remembering itself
before colour
accepted obedience.

The fractured chalice
held more heaven
than the cathedral
that refused it.

Your silence arrived

with the faint sweetness
left inside a cupboard
after a cherished vessel
has been lifted away.

Every thorn
forgot blood.

Every serpent
its verdict.

Every stone
its apprenticeship
to violence.

Then the hidden ordinance
of creation
stood unveiled.

Paradise has never dwelt
inside perfection.

Its earliest radiance
has always sought
whatever certainty
condemns first.

The universe keeps its original face

inside whatever perfection
cannot imitate.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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August 28, 2026 at 4:29 AM
This is a really deep and philosophical take on the theme... For me it seems, it has a very clear philosophical thread running through it. What happens when something is condemned because it doesn't conform to somebody else's definition of perfection? The imagery is amazing with lines like, the alabaster raven, chrysoprase chalice, black asphodel and bent aureole, all feel like things from some strange, forgotten sacred world. Congratulations on your first place.
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August 28, 2026 at 4:41 AM
Dear Silent One, my poor verses have earned their breath by thy discerning and most sincere reading of them. Thy generous eye hath found in them more than my faltering quill knew to disclose; and for that gift, I am humbly grateful. The crown is mine only by thy seeing. 🌹 ✨"Wherein my feeble quill hath found its flight, Thy faithful gaze hath lent the verse its breath; Thy seeing drew hid embers into light, And rescued fragile songs from mute and death; If aught of mine now blooms beyond the page, 'Tis thine own grace that taught its voice to age." ✨
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July 31, 2026 at 6:27 AM
Woah! This is so beguiling dark and atmosphere, the melancholic imagery that you've so meticulously layered with symbolism as well as metaphors, ah, everything feels so intricate. Love the use of various techniques here! Especially that line "The alabaster raven was daylight remembering itself before colour accepted obedience." Gosh, that is so sincerely brilliantly and poetically profound ~ also, "obsidian lilies raised their chalices beyond the jurisdiction of dawn." Ah the sharpness.. soul-piercing! What a deep poem this is! Pleasure reading your impeccable artistry today, that speaks on so many levels.. and that ending is just powerful. Sending you light and best wishes always ✨🕊️🌙⭐
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July 31, 2026 at 6:38 AM
Dear Hiya, Your reading lingered where I had hoped the poem might still be breathing. When you paused beside the raven before colour accepted obedience, and the lilies beyond the jurisdiction of dawn, I felt those images had found a companion rather than merely a reader. Such recognitions cannot be summoned by explanation; they arrive by kinship of perception. Your phrase, "soul-piercing," moved me quietly, for I have long believed a poem should leave no wound except one through which a little more light may enter. If this bloom carried even a small portion of that grace to you, then it has fulfilled a purpose beyond my own intention. Thank you for bringing your generous eye, your luminous spirit, and your patience to these uncanonized marvels. May your own poems continue to discover those hidden ordinances that reveal themselves only to hearts willing to walk beyond certainty. In the keeping of light, Mohit Mitra
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