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Is the flowing rushing in...or, is the flowing rushing out? Are we returning to where it all begins, or is it the consequence of doubt, if an altered state is out of place positioning one in the wrong period, false impressions may debase sequential are the myriad... They say,lie with dogs you get their fleas, it's not the dog you should be concerned... you never know, what kind of disease lies within' the flea. * (the flea is a metaphor for attitude and impressions)

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Date: 3/10/2011 8:57:00 AM
hi Jay...."water issue" did not know that about our previous puppet-president....I know a similar situation in Texas where tbpickins' controls more semi-humorous thing 'bout "Lake Superior" water....I recall a story reported on recently...I guess there is also a foreign company that secretly got access to siphon and "directly" bottle The lake's water for "retail-sale" in the far east!!!! wuddalaff!!!! jimbo
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Date: 3/9/2011 8:35:00 PM
Quite profound, Jay. You give us a lot to think about in that last verse. Best wishes, Carolyn
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