An Untrodden Path

Dawn in the forest,
tiny rainbow like sunrays
forming light spectrum,
an untrodden snowy path
waiting for my first foot print.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Grisetti Avatar
May 20, 2012 at 6:03 PM
Beautiful - love the images of snow when it is so warm here now.l
Kapoor Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 9:13 AM
Its a classic one Kash. Just great one. Love and best wishes..Ravindra
Dietrich Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 10:33 PM
Kashinath, mine are not duplicating. I always go reverse after I post a comment. this assures that I don't have to post again or delete an extra message. I think you figured out the trick too, didn't you? well, I am off to bed now. Back killing me! Goodnight, my friend.
Allen Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 10:14 PM
Just beautiful.......(soupmail) Huggs TLee
Allen Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 10:12 PM
Just beautiful.......(soupmail) Huggs TLee
Dietrich Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 9:47 PM
I love how you ended yours, Kash, that's so important to have a great ending!
Horne Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 10:53 AM
lovely tanka, Kash. Many congrats on all your wins : )
Onclaud Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 10:23 AM
you are unstoppable, kashi buddy!... touche!...:) huggs!. come visit!
Williams Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 9:39 AM
Kash, great tanka, good image you portray..David
Bauer Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 9:05 AM
very very nice! i love the final line.
May Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 8:50 AM
this is a great tanka Kash..best wishes
May Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 8:50 AM
this is a great tanka Kash..best wishes
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