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                  June 14, 2026, entered in Line Gauthier's Bite Size Poem contest 147

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An Unsullied View

I was a youth who seldom thought about
the fact that in the midst of life I was,
with each breath, getting closer to its end.		
I viewed life as a beautiful clear stream   
that never would run dry, eternal springtime, 
and lively music written for the young.
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Bauer Avatar
February 13, 2024 at 2:21 PM
ah yes, i guess we all felt that way at one time. not anymore! nicely said, janice...
Canerdy Avatar
February 17, 2024 at 6:31 PM
You're right~~not anymore! Thanks so much, Ilene! Janice
Pandit Avatar
February 13, 2024 at 5:49 AM
Those are the precious thoughts we dearly hold on to. Lively music indeed, Janice.
Canerdy Avatar
February 17, 2024 at 6:30 PM
Thanks a million, Vijay. Janice
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