An Unromantic View of Rain

It's a disorganized affair - 
water mixed up with the air.
Some people call it rain.
The atmosphere has gone insane.  
You try so hard to stay dry, yet -
it tries just as hard to make you wet.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Wolf Avatar
February 10, 2026 at 8:27 PM
I hereby submit this poem to the next edition of the Psychiatrist's Bible, to insert therein your definition of 'insane.' Thanks, Doc.
Crandall Avatar
February 11, 2026 at 8:45 AM
Thanks Gershon, I'm trying to get as many entries in there as i can!
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