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An Unripen Sun

An UNRIPEN SUN Such a brightened day without a sweetened sun Bringing an unsavoury end to a fastened hope     Sitting on wheels thus beating the wind With a vision from the west We doubted the mirage Hoping for a reflection without a diversion the clouds became spotted with dark patches Giving shorten light to a beaten path Beclouded by the darkened life Casting waking Shadows from every seeping life With a welcoming darkness edging away the light Giving an unwillingly nod to the revealing wind We merge into the evolving darkness

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