An Unripen Sun
An UNRIPEN SUN
Such a brightened day
without a sweetened sun
Bringing an unsavoury end
to a fastened hope
Sitting on wheels
thus beating the wind
With a vision from the west
We doubted the mirage
Hoping for a reflection
without a diversion
the clouds became spotted
with dark patches
Giving shorten light
to a beaten path
Beclouded by the darkened life
Casting waking Shadows
from every seeping life
With a welcoming darkness
edging away the light
Giving an unwillingly nod
to the revealing wind
We merge into the evolving darkness
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