An Unnamed Journey Slight Change

I sense it is impossible to rhyme 
in this journey and that even
with a poem searching for words
something is lost
Is it found in the breath
slowly with the slightest force
should we name it the Force 
or is it a lightness that joins
with the smallest molecules
atoms is that what I am
and you and the us
anything else if false is dust
am I trying to form something that
cannot be formed or is the Form
something we cannot know 
with its infinite reach
A form that is what the
Universe is and we are of
that form, briefly solid but unending
I feel at times a cold heaviness
in my chest and I am frightened
But if I inhale and see the stars
in the silence for that instance
forever seems real and unending
and a Force that we experience
as we search even pray for 
as we try to define ourselves 
and the Infinite that is forever

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 8/1/2021 6:52:00 AM
A form that is what the Universe is and we are of that form, briefly solid but unending I feel at times a cold heaviness - Beautiful Concept. Congratulations on Your Win!
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Date: 8/1/2021 2:56:00 AM
Thank you for participating in the contest, Linda and congrats on your win, with this outstanding poem! Your deep insights are worth reflecting upon
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