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An Unlikely Pair

An Unlikely Pair Two animals were flying through the trees. Happily singing were they, a bird and a bee. Effervescently fluttering like magic fairies. Before the sun had risen very high, Iridescent wings beneath the sky Raising their bodies each one spry. Delighted wafting on the wind two fly. Soaring as new heights they defy. An adventure shared by an unlikely pair. Nevertheless, an implausible friendship was in the air. Dipping, diving, buzzing and chirping with flare. Together enjoying all that nature had to offer. Hummer was a princess and Tweedy a bachelor. Eagerly, they explored excited by love’s flicker. Before long, they were talking about birds loving bees. Everybody knows that bees do not marry birdies. Each one wanted to know more about the birds and the bees. Since the subject is touchy…they flew home and asked their mommies. © August 8, 2010 Dane Smith-Johnsen

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Date: 9/10/2010 9:17:00 AM
Dane Ann, loved your awesome poem you entered in my contest thank you for entering. Congratulations on your win. I will soon have another contest and hope you will enter it also. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/10/2010 7:52:00 AM
I flew home to ask my mommy, too, Dane Ann, but she told me I knew more than she did. She was wrong. Enjoyed the humor! Congratulations on your success in Carol's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/10/2010 4:39:00 AM
LOL you go gal...I can just picture that try at intercourse ;) LOL great one Dane made me laugh! Light & Love
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Date: 9/9/2010 10:58:00 PM
Oh so cute Dane Ann and your last line made me laugh. Congratulations on your win! Aloha, Connie
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Date: 9/9/2010 10:39:00 PM
what a cute ending this one had! congratulations, DAne Ann, on winning with this poem LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/9/2010 10:13:00 PM
Cute little tale Dane. congratulations Love, joyce
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Date: 9/9/2010 6:55:00 PM
Well composed poem and well worded poem. Congratulations on the win, Dane
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Date: 9/9/2010 6:47:00 PM
cute one , congrats on your win
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Date: 9/9/2010 6:12:00 PM
Congratulations Dane on making the top ten with this grea t write! Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/9/2010 4:48:00 PM
Congrats Dane Ann on your super win in Carol's great contest... an excellent entry ..enjoy your special victory tonight with luv..
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Date: 8/9/2010 12:11:00 AM
Smile ~ This is so very lovely and beautiful and, the ending made me smile and laugh; so very cute ~ "Hello Again Dear Lovely & Precious Dane Ann" ~ This is such a fairytalistic and enchantingly perfect flowing brilliant poem dear lady; one for the faves ~ "Absolutely Beautiful Dear" ~ "My Love & Warmth Always to You & Your Loves," John! ~ "Have A Very Beautiful Tomorrow:" Bye!:) ~
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