An Unhidden Reality

I hate my deeds & 
everbody hates me
It's a fact and I know it
I am a burden so heavy 
I am a curse so dark
I am a person , i'hv bones
Not just a reason to 
throw stones
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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April 19, 2013 at 4:34 PM
Dear Fatima, Oh! my dear, I can not believe YOUR deeds were bad enough to be hated so.I have only read 3 of YOUR POEMS and I do not see any evil in YOU.Be kinder to YOUR self. YOUR first 2 POEMS were of LOVE and Respect,Therefore this Write is a falacy.YOU are a Welcomed addition to the POETRYSOUP Family. Fill YOUR Pen with LOVE.With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG
Zaidi Avatar
April 21, 2013 at 11:02 AM
i will do what ever u will say u made me so happy, my deeds as a student i do not gt good marks sometimes my behavior due to which i m scolded by mama.
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