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An Unformatted Prayer

Abandoned and alone in the middle of the ocean, Rummaging in the dark,awaiting for the lighthouse flash, Soaked into the series of failures, lost all my motion, Come on, blow out my misery with your powerful splash. Surrounded by the concealed hatred and the phony veils, Certainly a knotty task to intuit fake faces. When the truth never prevails and the untruth fails to fail, Come on,burn evils and save goods with your generous grace. Like the refreshing rain droplets on infertile dry land, drench me unconditionally with your pure love showers. Like an oasis in the desert, moist my hot dry sand, Like a spring, adorn my garden with alluring flowers. I wish you fathom my unformatted hidden prayer and bestow me with sheer confidence and courage to dare

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Date: 3/5/2018 12:07:00 PM
Hello Supraja, so nice to meet you. All I can say about your poem is that it is beautifully written. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 2/9/2018 10:11:00 AM
Beautiful unformatted (not by rote) prayer poem, Supraja. Most everyone can relate to your earnest, heartfelt plea. A great sonnet w/creative punch aplenty. May love light your path always.
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Date: 2/5/2018 3:53:00 PM
This is metaphorically beautiful, Supraja. Yours is a sincere prayer, arising from the depths of your heart...it definitely needs no formatting! Regards // paul
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Date: 2/5/2018 7:09:00 AM
So much urging in your words...an awesome creation depicting the misery of those left to fight for themselves..a lovely prayer seeking courage to do the right thing!
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Date: 2/5/2018 6:38:00 AM
An excellent sonnet Supraja and great subject.. Second stanza is a sad reality of so many fake people in life..
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Date: 2/5/2018 4:30:00 AM
- "Come on,burn evils and save goods with your generous grace" ... is a strong line - Beautifully written, Supraja :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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