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June 16, 2025, entered in Poet Destroyer A's How Well Do You Know Your Partner (With a Twist) contest

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An Unforgettable Christmas Day


It had been so long since I’d felt loved and wanted.
Then I met John. We basked in our late-in-life romance.
Gone was the loneliness that had left me feeling haunted.
Our relationship proved I had been wise to take a chance.

Though somewhat set in our ways, we adjusted well,
each accommodating the other. He often mentioned how much
we were alike. We had no serious disagreements. I fell
more deeply in love with him, daily craving his touch.

A year after we met, he proposed. Of course, I said, “YES!”
We retirees in the autumn of life would be together forever
enjoying each other and family, traveling. No stress---
Then came the devastating blow. Forever became never.

He called on Christmas Day, of all times, to say he’d changed his mind.
This man who’d often mentioned how alike we were declared
that we were too different. He made no effort to be kind,
to let me down gently. I doubt he ever loved me—or even cared.

He's been a casket full of bones for for six or seven years.
When I learned of his demise, I deeply sighed but shed no tears.
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Dietrich Avatar
June 27, 2025 at 4:59 PM
Wow. That would be quite the blow. It's good to tell these stories to vent and also others can realize what you have gone through and maybe you just made it up. Then that was a great ending!
Canerdy Avatar
June 28, 2025 at 4:45 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea. It's 100 percent true~~right down to the casket line. I never understood why he had to be so cruel about it! Janice
Rodrigues Avatar
June 16, 2025 at 4:44 PM
Terrible, not the poem, but the casket of bones who tricked you.
Canerdy Avatar
June 16, 2025 at 5:34 PM
THANKS, Kim! The sponsor asked for a twist! I tried to give one~~or two. :-) Janice
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