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An Uneasy Feeling


Thoughts of confusion were swirling 
in my head, and I desperately needed 
a quiet place to be,
I headed to the seaside, where I sat, 
gazing into the sea.
The calm, still body of water was
undisturbed by the gust of wind that
whizzed by,
Immersed in the silence of nothingness,
I prayed these muddled thoughts would
 fly away like a butterfly.

As I turned my head towards the sky,
I saw the dark clouds were slowly drifting 
by,
Suddenly, I felt the warmth of his sweet 
love draining from my heart , leaving 
it empty and stone cold.
Then, an overwhelming grip of 
emptiness took a painfully tight hold,
The Sun was now barely visible,
Oh, How I wish it were possible to be
invisible.

Oh, how I wished I could let go of this 
woe.
I couldn’t help but wonder if I was the
last one to know.

by Zyrool

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 9/3/2024 6:10:00 PM
A great poem. The ending tells the tale. Thanks for this tale.
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 9/4/2024 4:55:00 AM
Thank you for your beautiful words, and support Hilda. Greatly appreciated. Have a beautiful rest of the week, my friend. Stay Blessed.
Date: 9/2/2024 11:06:00 AM
Hello Zyrool, A heart break is hard to deal with whether in a relationship long or short. It takes time to heal. You just have not found your soulmate yet. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/3/2024 2:57:00 PM
Hello Zyrool, You are very welcome. I am here for you, Thank you for the kind words. Hugs. Your friend. /Darlene/
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 9/3/2024 12:19:00 PM
Your support and kind words truly makes a difference to me. You’re a blessing.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/3/2024 9:50:00 AM
Hello Zyrool, you are welcome. Yes the fickler of hope is always there. blessings & Love. /Darlene/Thank you.
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 9/3/2024 1:07:00 AM
Thank you for reading and your support, my friend. The flicker of hope is still lit. Sending Blessings and love your way.
Date: 9/2/2024 5:47:00 AM
Sometimes troubling thoughts are difficult to dismiss, as your poem illustrated. Have a nice week Zy
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 9/2/2024 7:15:00 AM
Thank you so much for the read Tom, it means a lot. Wishing you a fabulous new week my friend, stay blessed.

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