An Uncertain Rain

Shadows, remnants of lights;
tear drops of loneliness upon
a window pane of truth. The 
outside world, so unblemished; 
its only flaw, the window pane
we look through. 

Clouds turn dark, a loud roar
as it shakes the glass. How angry 
it is, how real it is. Loneliness, 
when will the lightning strike?
When will the shadows not dance?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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March 10, 2016 at 1:16 PM
Michael, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
Kiser Avatar
February 25, 2015 at 5:00 PM
Quite profound.
Jones Avatar
January 12, 2015 at 10:38 PM
love it!
Allison Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 11:22 PM
a deep and heartfelt write - I adore the first part and can relate to it at some stage in my life - GREAT write:-) Hugs jan xxx
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