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An Uncertain Rain

Shadows, remnants of lights; tear drops of loneliness upon a window pane of truth. The outside world, so unblemished; its only flaw, the window pane we look through. Clouds turn dark, a loud roar as it shakes the glass. How angry it is, how real it is. Loneliness, when will the lightning strike? When will the shadows not dance?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/10/2016 1:16:00 PM
Michael, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 2/25/2015 5:00:00 PM
Quite profound.
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Date: 1/12/2015 10:38:00 PM
love it!
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Date: 9/3/2014 11:22:00 PM
a deep and heartfelt write - I adore the first part and can relate to it at some stage in my life - GREAT write:-) Hugs jan xxx
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