An Outdoor Relish

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Can you still grasp me trembling on the ledge? Your braw heart was precautious to dive in. Do you spot me pause seeking out a pledge? Can you still grasp me trembling on the ledge? A strong leaf turns to a caring skin hedge. To taste my zeal in your arms and within. Can you still grasp me trembling on the ledge? Your braw heart was precautious to dive in. Written: March 20, 2023

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/21/2023 4:46:00 PM

When I see a triolet I think of dear Milton. Great line: Your braw heart was precautious to dive in

Paige Hind

Date: 3/21/2023 11:24:00 AM

This is full of adrenalin. Good and beautiful work!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 3/21/2023 10:44:00 AM

The poem is lovely, and the picture is amazing, Lasaad. Fantastic writing, my friend. :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/21/2023 7:36:00 AM

An outstanding Triolet that was written by your inspiring pen, my dearest friend, Lasaad. One has to observe and learn. Be blessed.