Sotto Poet Poet Triolet

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An Outdoor Relish

Can you still grasp me trembling on the ledge?
Your braw heart was precautious to dive in. 
Do you spot me pause seeking out a pledge?
Can you still grasp me trembling on the ledge?
A strong leaf turns to a caring skin hedge.
To taste my zeal in your arms and within.
Can you still grasp me trembling on the ledge?
Your braw heart was precautious to dive in.

Written: March 20, 2023

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Kim Rodrigues March 21, 2023 at 4:46 PM When I see a triolet I think of dear Milton. Great line: Your braw heart was precautious to dive in

Paige Hind March 21, 2023 at 11:24 AM This is full of adrenalin. Good and beautiful work!

Evelyn Judy Buehler March 21, 2023 at 10:44 AM The poem is lovely, and the picture is amazing, Lasaad. Fantastic writing, my friend. :)

Demetrios Trifiatis March 21, 2023 at 7:36 AM An outstanding Triolet that was written by your inspiring pen, my dearest friend, Lasaad. One has to observe and learn. Be blessed.