An Orchid's Death

In a vision-I
heard an orchid
bleed red and die
I woke me from my
troubled sleep.

From this sound
came my vision
of waking from sleep
because an orchid
die right then.

From the meaning
I had heard enough
yet had seen no vision
as yet and I never did.

So strange that a
vision could sense
but make no sound
and see nothing but
and orchid did
die then.

In a dream-I
saw a vision there
and it sounded
so very dead and
was so intensely red
as I slept an orchid
faded away.


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Krutsinger Avatar
December 29, 2020 at 8:30 AM
The orchid is so delicate and gorgeous, it is startling to think of her death. Congratulations on your new book Rob. I liked this one; ending makes it seems normal, which is the way we all go eventually.
Levasseur Avatar
December 29, 2020 at 8:52 AM
Caren thank you for your comments and for your encouragement about my upcoming book. I appreciate you stopping by!
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